Love Poem for phoone.(and magsJ TOO!!!)))

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Re: Love Poem for phoone.(and magsJ TOO!!!)))

Postby polishyouthgotipbanned » Thu Jan 07, 2021 3:49 pm

what are you gonna do???argue whether Holocaust actually took place with autistic lunatics for-ever??? might aswell write a poem for a pretty ladies...magsj is older but way nicer so it balances out...still a poem for her is coming...
MY STEP DADDY SATIRE::: excessive sensitivity to setbacks and rebuffs;
tendency to bear grudges persistently (i.e. refusal to forgive insults and injuries or slights);
suspiciousness and a pervasive tendency to distort experience by misconstruing the neutral or friendly actions of others as hostile or contemptuous;
a combative and tenacious sense of self-righteousness out of keeping with the actual situation;
recurrent suspicions, without justification, regarding sexual fidelity of spouse or sexual partner;
tendency to experience excessive self-aggrandizing, manifest in a persistent self-referential attitude;
preoccupation with unsubstantiated "conspiratorial" explanations of events both immediate to the patient and in the world at large.
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Postby phoneutria » Thu Jan 07, 2021 4:22 pm

i might be older than mags
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Postby polishyouthgotipbanned » Thu Jan 07, 2021 4:39 pm

id write something clever but my mind went blank thinking of you... :oops: :oops: :oops:
MY STEP DADDY SATIRE::: excessive sensitivity to setbacks and rebuffs;
tendency to bear grudges persistently (i.e. refusal to forgive insults and injuries or slights);
suspiciousness and a pervasive tendency to distort experience by misconstruing the neutral or friendly actions of others as hostile or contemptuous;
a combative and tenacious sense of self-righteousness out of keeping with the actual situation;
recurrent suspicions, without justification, regarding sexual fidelity of spouse or sexual partner;
tendency to experience excessive self-aggrandizing, manifest in a persistent self-referential attitude;
preoccupation with unsubstantiated "conspiratorial" explanations of events both immediate to the patient and in the world at large.
Includes: expansive paranoid, fanatic, querulant and sensitive paranoid personality disorder.
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Re: Love Poem for phoone.(and magsJ TOO!!!)))

Postby polishyouthgotipbanned » Thu Jan 07, 2021 4:41 pm

i am confused BBee do you wantt me to finish my poem for you or not??? :oops: :oops: :oops:
MY STEP DADDY SATIRE::: excessive sensitivity to setbacks and rebuffs;
tendency to bear grudges persistently (i.e. refusal to forgive insults and injuries or slights);
suspiciousness and a pervasive tendency to distort experience by misconstruing the neutral or friendly actions of others as hostile or contemptuous;
a combative and tenacious sense of self-righteousness out of keeping with the actual situation;
recurrent suspicions, without justification, regarding sexual fidelity of spouse or sexual partner;
tendency to experience excessive self-aggrandizing, manifest in a persistent self-referential attitude;
preoccupation with unsubstantiated "conspiratorial" explanations of events both immediate to the patient and in the world at large.
Includes: expansive paranoid, fanatic, querulant and sensitive paranoid personality disorder.
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Re: Love Poem for phoone.(and magsJ TOO!!!)))

Postby polishyouthgotipbanned » Thu Jan 07, 2021 5:15 pm

so far we have this:
As the grass flows...
My love for her elegant beauty grows...
As my love for her splendid vigour grows...
Her soul scorns my souls strolls...
As her soul scorns my soul toils...
My brain toils...
lets me write something for magsJ, the sex goddess of ILP(despite her age ph00ne is no competition)...:
The blood to nerve through muscle with skin against fur for warmth
warmth of fur pressing skin with muscle through nerve stirring strangers blood
jolt, churn, paddle, concuss, convulse, discomfit, demoralise
shape,
shadow,
a transparent cup for one of melting gold
with molten gold mixing with the sizzling blood of two
blood both melting and sizzling
and fading and thickening
waiting to run.
Last edited by polishyouthgotipbanned on Thu Jan 07, 2021 5:18 pm, edited 1 time in total.
MY STEP DADDY SATIRE::: excessive sensitivity to setbacks and rebuffs;
tendency to bear grudges persistently (i.e. refusal to forgive insults and injuries or slights);
suspiciousness and a pervasive tendency to distort experience by misconstruing the neutral or friendly actions of others as hostile or contemptuous;
a combative and tenacious sense of self-righteousness out of keeping with the actual situation;
recurrent suspicions, without justification, regarding sexual fidelity of spouse or sexual partner;
tendency to experience excessive self-aggrandizing, manifest in a persistent self-referential attitude;
preoccupation with unsubstantiated "conspiratorial" explanations of events both immediate to the patient and in the world at large.
Includes: expansive paranoid, fanatic, querulant and sensitive paranoid personality disorder.
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Re: Love Poem for phoone.(and magsJ TOO!!!)))

Postby Mr Reasonable » Thu Jan 07, 2021 5:18 pm

write one about me no one has ever done that before
You see...a pimp's love is very different from that of a square.
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Postby polishyouthgotipbanned » Thu Jan 07, 2021 5:20 pm

shit
shite-head
shit-mouth
shitting
shit
shit for shit
shit...
MY STEP DADDY SATIRE::: excessive sensitivity to setbacks and rebuffs;
tendency to bear grudges persistently (i.e. refusal to forgive insults and injuries or slights);
suspiciousness and a pervasive tendency to distort experience by misconstruing the neutral or friendly actions of others as hostile or contemptuous;
a combative and tenacious sense of self-righteousness out of keeping with the actual situation;
recurrent suspicions, without justification, regarding sexual fidelity of spouse or sexual partner;
tendency to experience excessive self-aggrandizing, manifest in a persistent self-referential attitude;
preoccupation with unsubstantiated "conspiratorial" explanations of events both immediate to the patient and in the world at large.
Includes: expansive paranoid, fanatic, querulant and sensitive paranoid personality disorder.
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Re: Love Poem for phoone.(and magsJ TOO!!!)))

Postby Mr Reasonable » Thu Jan 07, 2021 5:22 pm

polishyouthgotipbanned wrote:shit
shite-head
shit-mouth
shitting
shit
shit for shit
shit...



its beautiful. literally gave me chillbumps
You see...a pimp's love is very different from that of a square.
Dating a stripper is like eating a noisy bag of chips in church. Everyone looks at you in disgust, but deep down they want some too.

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Re: Love Poem for phoone.(and magsJ TOO!!!)))

Postby polishyouthgotipbanned » Thu Jan 07, 2021 5:23 pm

take this tongue in cheek,,,no hard feeling for you 'friend'...
MY STEP DADDY SATIRE::: excessive sensitivity to setbacks and rebuffs;
tendency to bear grudges persistently (i.e. refusal to forgive insults and injuries or slights);
suspiciousness and a pervasive tendency to distort experience by misconstruing the neutral or friendly actions of others as hostile or contemptuous;
a combative and tenacious sense of self-righteousness out of keeping with the actual situation;
recurrent suspicions, without justification, regarding sexual fidelity of spouse or sexual partner;
tendency to experience excessive self-aggrandizing, manifest in a persistent self-referential attitude;
preoccupation with unsubstantiated "conspiratorial" explanations of events both immediate to the patient and in the world at large.
Includes: expansive paranoid, fanatic, querulant and sensitive paranoid personality disorder.
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Re: Love Poem for phoone.(and magsJ TOO!!!)))

Postby MagsJ » Thu Jan 07, 2021 5:56 pm

polishyouthgotipbanned wrote:what are you gonna do???argue whether Holocaust actually took place with autistic lunatics for-ever??? might aswell write a poem for a pretty ladies...magsj is older but way nicer so it balances out...still a poem for her is coming...

Er.. thanks. 8-[

phoneutria wrote:i might be older than mags

I’m not sure how old you are tbh, but as long as we look younger than our years right.. ; )

polishyouthgotipbanned wrote:id write something clever but my mind went blank thinking of you... :oops: :oops: :oops:

I bet it did! :lol:
Perhaps that’s Phon’s magic power.. to make men’s minds go blank, lol.
The possibility of anything we can imagine existing is endless and infinite.. - MagsJ
I haven't got the time to spend the time reading something that is telling me nothing, as I will never be able to get back that time, and I may need it for something at some point in time.. Huh! - MagsJ
You’re suggestions and I, just simply don’t mix.. like oil on water, or a really bad DJ - MagsJ
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Re: Love Poem for phoone.(and magsJ TOO!!!)))

Postby polishyouthgotipbanned » Thu Jan 07, 2021 6:00 pm

did you like the poem though???is art no concern here???!!!
MY STEP DADDY SATIRE::: excessive sensitivity to setbacks and rebuffs;
tendency to bear grudges persistently (i.e. refusal to forgive insults and injuries or slights);
suspiciousness and a pervasive tendency to distort experience by misconstruing the neutral or friendly actions of others as hostile or contemptuous;
a combative and tenacious sense of self-righteousness out of keeping with the actual situation;
recurrent suspicions, without justification, regarding sexual fidelity of spouse or sexual partner;
tendency to experience excessive self-aggrandizing, manifest in a persistent self-referential attitude;
preoccupation with unsubstantiated "conspiratorial" explanations of events both immediate to the patient and in the world at large.
Includes: expansive paranoid, fanatic, querulant and sensitive paranoid personality disorder.
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Re: Love Poem for phoone.(and magsJ TOO!!!)))

Postby MagsJ » Thu Jan 07, 2021 6:48 pm

polishyouthgotipbanned wrote:did you like the poem though???is art no concern here???!!!

polishyouthgotipbanned wrote:lets me write something for magsJ, the sex goddess of ILP(despite her age ph00ne is no competition)...:
The blood to nerve through muscle with skin against fur for warmth
warmth of fur pressing skin with muscle through nerve stirring strangers blood
jolt, churn, paddle, concuss, convulse, discomfit, demoralise
shape,
shadow,
a transparent cup for one of melting gold
with molten gold mixing with the sizzling blood of two
blood both melting and sizzling
and fading and thickening
waiting to run.

Hey, that’s not a bad offering at all..

This is my favourite monostich of the poem, especially: “a transparent cup for one of melting gold” ..though I’m much more modest than you think, or that I really portray.
The possibility of anything we can imagine existing is endless and infinite.. - MagsJ
I haven't got the time to spend the time reading something that is telling me nothing, as I will never be able to get back that time, and I may need it for something at some point in time.. Huh! - MagsJ
You’re suggestions and I, just simply don’t mix.. like oil on water, or a really bad DJ - MagsJ
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Re: Love Poem for phoone.(and magsJ TOO!!!)))

Postby polishyouthgotipbanned » Thu Jan 07, 2021 7:05 pm

what do you mean by offering???ithis is neither a brothel nor a sexphone line i dont demand anything nor do i offer anything to anybody in exchange.
MY STEP DADDY SATIRE::: excessive sensitivity to setbacks and rebuffs;
tendency to bear grudges persistently (i.e. refusal to forgive insults and injuries or slights);
suspiciousness and a pervasive tendency to distort experience by misconstruing the neutral or friendly actions of others as hostile or contemptuous;
a combative and tenacious sense of self-righteousness out of keeping with the actual situation;
recurrent suspicions, without justification, regarding sexual fidelity of spouse or sexual partner;
tendency to experience excessive self-aggrandizing, manifest in a persistent self-referential attitude;
preoccupation with unsubstantiated "conspiratorial" explanations of events both immediate to the patient and in the world at large.
Includes: expansive paranoid, fanatic, querulant and sensitive paranoid personality disorder.
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Postby promethean75 » Thu Jan 07, 2021 7:43 pm

"its beautiful. literally gave me chillbumps"

I thought the piece was shitty, myself.
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Postby phoneutria » Thu Jan 07, 2021 7:57 pm

maybe it's the kind of chills you get when you're about to have the runs
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Postby iambiguous » Thu Jan 07, 2021 8:02 pm

phoneutria wrote:maybe it's the kind of chills you get when you're about to have the runs


Har Har Harr! :wink:



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Postby polishyouthgotipbanned » Thu Jan 07, 2021 8:40 pm

phoneutria wrote:maybe it's the kind of chills you get when you're about to have the runs

jeez,,,kinda triggered me more shittalking about my poetry than shittalking and ridiculing myself...neither you nor magsj can appreciate good art...go draw another swollen pussy or plastic tits with rock hard nipples and call that art...i am happy if you are...AND DONT TALK SHIT ON MY ART BITCH.
MY STEP DADDY SATIRE::: excessive sensitivity to setbacks and rebuffs;
tendency to bear grudges persistently (i.e. refusal to forgive insults and injuries or slights);
suspiciousness and a pervasive tendency to distort experience by misconstruing the neutral or friendly actions of others as hostile or contemptuous;
a combative and tenacious sense of self-righteousness out of keeping with the actual situation;
recurrent suspicions, without justification, regarding sexual fidelity of spouse or sexual partner;
tendency to experience excessive self-aggrandizing, manifest in a persistent self-referential attitude;
preoccupation with unsubstantiated "conspiratorial" explanations of events both immediate to the patient and in the world at large.
Includes: expansive paranoid, fanatic, querulant and sensitive paranoid personality disorder.
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Postby promethean75 » Thu Jan 07, 2021 8:45 pm

Damn man I wanna see a swollen pussy. Ya'll can draw swollen pussies?
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Postby polishyouthgotipbanned » Thu Jan 07, 2021 8:47 pm

As the grass flows...
My love for her elegant beauty grows...
As my love for her splendid vigour grows...
Her soul scorns my souls strolls...
As her soul scorns my soul toils...
My brain toils...

regarding the above poem,,,i like it...but it flows too childishly...rhyming off verbs is too easy, especially of s ended ones...i will work on it though...i like it.
***
The blood to nerve through muscle with skin against fur for warmth
warmth of fur pressing skin with muscle through nerve stirring strangers blood
jolt, churn, paddle, concuss, convulse, discomfit, demoralise
shape,
shadow,
a transparent cup for one of melting gold
with molten gold mixing with the sizzling blood of two
blood both melting and sizzling
and fading and thickening
waiting to run.
MY STEP DADDY SATIRE::: excessive sensitivity to setbacks and rebuffs;
tendency to bear grudges persistently (i.e. refusal to forgive insults and injuries or slights);
suspiciousness and a pervasive tendency to distort experience by misconstruing the neutral or friendly actions of others as hostile or contemptuous;
a combative and tenacious sense of self-righteousness out of keeping with the actual situation;
recurrent suspicions, without justification, regarding sexual fidelity of spouse or sexual partner;
tendency to experience excessive self-aggrandizing, manifest in a persistent self-referential attitude;
preoccupation with unsubstantiated "conspiratorial" explanations of events both immediate to the patient and in the world at large.
Includes: expansive paranoid, fanatic, querulant and sensitive paranoid personality disorder.
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Re: Love Poem for phoone.(and magsJ TOO!!!)))

Postby polishyouthgotipbanned » Thu Jan 07, 2021 8:48 pm

promethean75 wrote:Damn man I wanna see a swollen pussy. Ya'll can draw swollen pussies?

if you wanna see a swollen pussy take a mirror and put it in front of your face the front side facing towards you idiot. you idiots are too clever...i was not joking when i said i loved phone...i am hurt now...and i am autistic...and small dick...and virgin... :oops: :oops: :oops:
in conclusion... now it is clear i am a loser and a bum and an eunuch...can you consider leaving me the fuck alone with ur bullshit???
MY STEP DADDY SATIRE::: excessive sensitivity to setbacks and rebuffs;
tendency to bear grudges persistently (i.e. refusal to forgive insults and injuries or slights);
suspiciousness and a pervasive tendency to distort experience by misconstruing the neutral or friendly actions of others as hostile or contemptuous;
a combative and tenacious sense of self-righteousness out of keeping with the actual situation;
recurrent suspicions, without justification, regarding sexual fidelity of spouse or sexual partner;
tendency to experience excessive self-aggrandizing, manifest in a persistent self-referential attitude;
preoccupation with unsubstantiated "conspiratorial" explanations of events both immediate to the patient and in the world at large.
Includes: expansive paranoid, fanatic, querulant and sensitive paranoid personality disorder.
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Re: Love Poem for phoone.(and magsJ TOO!!!)))

Postby promethean75 » Thu Jan 07, 2021 8:53 pm

Yeah my thing is i'ont think someone can scorn a soul's stroll.

Grass can flow though if there's like wind or something blowing it or you could like get a fan and set it in the yard if there isnt any wind plus the grass can't be too short because it won't flow if it is make sure the lawn care guy didnt just cut it
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Postby MagsJ » Thu Jan 07, 2021 8:53 pm

polishyouthgotipbanned wrote:what do you mean by offering???ithis is neither a brothel nor a sexphone line i dont demand anything nor do i offer anything to anybody in exchange.

It’s an antiquated term, of biblical origin.. I know no other version of the terminology, so I’m not sure where your definition of the word is coming from.. in your mind?

Why have you taken the meaning of ‘offering’ in the light that you have chosen to see it?
The possibility of anything we can imagine existing is endless and infinite.. - MagsJ
I haven't got the time to spend the time reading something that is telling me nothing, as I will never be able to get back that time, and I may need it for something at some point in time.. Huh! - MagsJ
You’re suggestions and I, just simply don’t mix.. like oil on water, or a really bad DJ - MagsJ
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Postby promethean75 » Thu Jan 07, 2021 8:56 pm

"i am hurt now...and i am autistic...and small dick...and virgin...   
in conclusion... now it is clear i am a loser and a bum and an eunuch...can you consider leaving me the fuck alone with ur bullshit???"

Who said u r a loozer and a bum because of all that? That stuff doesnt make you a loozer and a bum.
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Postby Mr Reasonable » Thu Jan 07, 2021 9:24 pm

phoneutria wrote:maybe it's the kind of chills you get when you're about to have the runs


sad to report that this did in fact turn out to be the case
You see...a pimp's love is very different from that of a square.
Dating a stripper is like eating a noisy bag of chips in church. Everyone looks at you in disgust, but deep down they want some too.

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Postby polishyouthgotipbanned » Thu Jan 07, 2021 10:29 pm

that hurt... :oops: :oops: :oops:
MY STEP DADDY SATIRE::: excessive sensitivity to setbacks and rebuffs;
tendency to bear grudges persistently (i.e. refusal to forgive insults and injuries or slights);
suspiciousness and a pervasive tendency to distort experience by misconstruing the neutral or friendly actions of others as hostile or contemptuous;
a combative and tenacious sense of self-righteousness out of keeping with the actual situation;
recurrent suspicions, without justification, regarding sexual fidelity of spouse or sexual partner;
tendency to experience excessive self-aggrandizing, manifest in a persistent self-referential attitude;
preoccupation with unsubstantiated "conspiratorial" explanations of events both immediate to the patient and in the world at large.
Includes: expansive paranoid, fanatic, querulant and sensitive paranoid personality disorder.
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