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Elevate form over function to get at less easily articulable truths.

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Postby Pedro I Rengel » Sat Nov 28, 2020 11:20 pm

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Postby Mr Reasonable » Sun Nov 29, 2020 5:05 am

one of your best posts
You see...a pimp's love is very different from that of a square.


Dating a stripper is like eating a noisy bag of chips in church. Everyone looks at you in disgust, but deep down they want some too.
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Postby promethean75 » Sun Nov 29, 2020 12:45 pm

I must admit I'm quite confused by pedro's new style of literation.
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Postby phoneutria » Sun Nov 29, 2020 12:54 pm

why did you delete it
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Postby Pedro I Rengel » Mon Nov 30, 2020 3:55 pm

Alright you faggots this is the poem:
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Postby Pedro I Rengel » Mon Nov 30, 2020 3:55 pm

Opening sanctuaries
The earth gapes
Hovering above the running waters
Vast, like the ocean
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Postby Meno_ » Thu Dec 03, 2020 7:36 pm

Pedro I Rengel wrote:Opening sanctuaries
The earth gapes
Hovering above the running waters
Vast, like the ocean





Even as it may as drip
off the single blade
a drop of dew
In the early gleam of sun
between the glades of firn-omen't
scent through.
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Postby Pedro I Rengel » Thu Dec 03, 2020 7:50 pm

Forgive me for this, but heck it is my thread and I will play the part of editor.


Meno_ wrote:Even as may drip
Off the single blade
A drop of dew
In the early gleam of Sun
Between the glades of firmament
Sent through
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Postby Meno_ » Thu Dec 03, 2020 8:06 pm

Pedro I Rengel wrote:Forgive me for this, but heck it is my thread and I will play the part of editor.


Meno_ wrote:Even as may drip
Off the single blade
A drop of dew
In the early gleam of Sun
Between the glades of firmament
Sent through




You're forgiven.
Even if your affections otherwise , elsewhere marched to a different tune

To me, at least, consistency is sacred.

Not that I may also not be wrong.
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Postby Pedro I Rengel » Thu Dec 03, 2020 8:17 pm

Amen, brother.
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Postby Mr Reasonable » Thu Dec 03, 2020 11:06 pm

Pedro I Rengel wrote:Opening sanctuaries
The earth gapes
Hovering above the running waters
Vast, like the ocean



this makes me think of vaginas
You see...a pimp's love is very different from that of a square.


Dating a stripper is like eating a noisy bag of chips in church. Everyone looks at you in disgust, but deep down they want some too.
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Postby Pedro I Rengel » Thu Dec 03, 2020 11:30 pm

I would go so far as to say that is the entire goal of poetry.
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Postby Meno_ » Thu Dec 03, 2020 11:46 pm

Pedro I Rengel wrote:I would go so far as to say that is the entire goal of poetry.




The dewey drip by drip analogy may be a more actual reminder of the reality principle.

The slow flowing of the Don, a harsh reminder.

Take it in any context if You wish.
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Postby Pedro I Rengel » Thu Dec 03, 2020 11:53 pm

I bet you kill the ladies with that.
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Postby Meno_ » Fri Dec 04, 2020 12:00 am

Hook, line and sinker
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Postby Pedro I Rengel » Fri Dec 04, 2020 12:01 am

Hahahahahahahaha
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