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Meaning

PostPosted: Sat Oct 03, 2020 1:17 pm
by Ierrellus
Meaning--
Is it from gleaning?
Is it fine tuning
Or patient pruning?

No matter how meaning
Is stated--
Over-- or under--rated,
It remains
Desire in human brains.

Re: Meaning

PostPosted: Sat Oct 03, 2020 2:22 pm
by derleydoo
=D> Very nice.

Re: Meaning

PostPosted: Sat Oct 03, 2020 8:34 pm
by Ierrellus
derleydoo wrote:=D> Very nice.

Thank you.

Re: Meaning

PostPosted: Sat Oct 03, 2020 9:33 pm
by Meno_
Irrellus said:



"Meaning--
Is it from gleaning?
Is it fine tuning
Or patient pruning?

No matter how meaning
Is stated--
Over-- or under--rated,
It remains
Desire in human brains"

Or:


" Meaning.......
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desire in human brains"


This is eclectic , not that the other rhythmic lines should be considered structurally unnecessary,

but to point to my own take: that the late William Burroughs replied, when asked about Ezra Pound's intimation of the equivocation between the biochemical substance inherent in both :seminal fluid and the cerebral cortex

He said he was not familiar with it. ( even though it has become cliché to talk of seminal narratives)

I lost my only copy of Ezra Pound,'s " Cantos" , but I could swear to it being in there.


Please don't take this,as irrelevant, only an old frontier into a road seldom if ever traveled, the the last frontier, that struck me as if intended covers for drawing some architectural design .


Reminds me of what someone implied recently about structural drawing, and then erasing that on second thought.
But then, meaning and it's intended revision , the next day, even before the paint dried, causes more problems then forming any clear message.



Now I am compelled to delete, but almost an equally forceful desire works against it, so I will leave it.



But this was an overly impressionistic take, that probably wasn't meant to elicit, so will comment with the following

Re: Meaning

PostPosted: Sat Oct 03, 2020 9:44 pm
by Meno_
Ierrellus wrote:
derleydoo wrote:=D> Very nice.

Thank you.






And I second the motion to commend a very keen and intuitive verse.

Re: Meaning

PostPosted: Sun Oct 04, 2020 12:17 pm
by Ierrellus
Meno_ wrote:
Ierrellus wrote:
derleydoo wrote:=D> Very nice.

Thank you.






And I second the motion to commend a very keen and intuitive verse.

Thank you.