by Meno_ » Sat Oct 03, 2020 9:33 pm
Irrellus said:
"Meaning--
Is it from gleaning?
Is it fine tuning
Or patient pruning?
No matter how meaning
Is stated--
Over-- or under--rated,
It remains
Desire in human brains"
Or:
" Meaning.......
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desire in human brains"
This is eclectic , not that the other rhythmic lines should be considered structurally unnecessary,
but to point to my own take: that the late William Burroughs replied, when asked about Ezra Pound's intimation of the equivocation between the biochemical substance inherent in both :seminal fluid and the cerebral cortex
He said he was not familiar with it. ( even though it has become cliché to talk of seminal narratives)
I lost my only copy of Ezra Pound,'s " Cantos" , but I could swear to it being in there.
Please don't take this,as irrelevant, only an old frontier into a road seldom if ever traveled, the the last frontier, that struck me as if intended covers for drawing some architectural design .
Reminds me of what someone implied recently about structural drawing, and then erasing that on second thought.
But then, meaning and it's intended revision , the next day, even before the paint dried, causes more problems then forming any clear message.
Now I am compelled to delete, but almost an equally forceful desire works against it, so I will leave it.
But this was an overly impressionistic take, that probably wasn't meant to elicit, so will comment with the following
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Meno_ on Sat Oct 03, 2020 11:23 pm, edited 5 times in total.