American Captive

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Re: American Captive

Postby Meno_ » Fri Feb 05, 2021 11:09 pm

Berkley Babes wrote:
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Berkley Babes wrote:They hold me hostage, these savages. In every captivity narrative there comes a spiritual awakening. Ready for it, I wait for mine.




Admiration due to such intention. What realization follows is reminiscent to goody waiting for something to happen. Something

In fact the only thing to await is the wait itself. If that becomes too heavy, Godot will most assuredly pray. For You. That's it. That has got to be it.

Follow the heart, it will lead to the Soul., which is a comfort in captivity.

The captivity in stead, will turn , and become a source of Captivation!


Haha, and captivation is what i am ultimately after!

Call me the captivizer...

American Captive turns 20 this year and I'm wondering what follows.


What follows is if anything, wonderful has to. There is no doubt, at those moments the grains of granite the light reflecting in thought always will be there , within all the energy accumulated since the eternities commenced to think of it.


Besides you and I and any and everybody began as babes in arms, as of mothers careful waiting for him to return.


And he did come home one night to be forgiven.


And, ....,



babes 20 something.

Jan Kerouac wrote a novel too. She was young but wrote out of a silver spooned plated ire. She so much wanted it, to come out, to find out the ink behind what was there, and after all there was much shadow to be reflected from an inner darkness.


But in vain, papa never came home. Saw her in a glimmer, furitive, searching and fast. But, it was not to be for the reasons were glaringly obvious, the shoes to be filled like silent boats forging ahead, in a swamp full of sharks, never had a more illegitimate forey into the true heart of darkness.


The speed gone, well what transpired was predictable, just like that neoclastic archytypes Neal cassidy, the buoyant epic of male orgasmic eruption, who went way before grateful became dead.

Wanna go home again, ?
Don't look angel, home bound for angel is gone
Look elsewhere, beyond the deft summary boldly highlighted in anteriors, hiding baroque interior magic spells

as if-


Imprimaturs of atonement mix with upward swirling wifts of musk.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Meno_ » Tue Feb 09, 2021 11:40 pm

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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Wed Feb 10, 2021 12:33 am

right right right

babalicious here to reply

It still amazes me that Vincent Van Gogh sold one painting in his life for 75 bucks, but after his death one of his painting sold for 100 million. Even the gun that he shot himself with went for something like 800 thousand.

Romantized tortured starving artists

Philip K. Dick struggled financially but movies based on his books made billions.

What is my point here, do I dare compare myself to these artists? Yes, but not really. I could probably add 15000 words to American Captive and it would involve a "Twist." akin to "He loved big brother."

But I don't think I can bring myself to do it.

I'm about ready to let this thread sink off this page, unless meno my second reader keeps it alive. What's in it for him? think van gogh's pistolo

I wont kill myself like van gogh because he and I are not the same.

Peace out dear Meno, whoever and wherever you are in the world.

Keep it underground. Debaser. Kid 606 in love with the underground. And all that jazz.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Meno_ » Thu Feb 11, 2021 3:11 am

Even one reader is better than one, as at times one writer is preferred to multiple.

As far as Your worth is considered, how could Dostoevsky deal with notes underground if he had nit assumed a minim reception? Some noted are retdivedong aftsr, found in bittles, where a genie has ti retrieve it? To one or some?

Really the examples show the hypocrisy of the world's reception, and One literally has to attend a Mad tea party after falling into a hole, a hike that dade not be looked into fir friar if being looked back; in order to envision weather the desire to
exclaim, " I've been down so long as to firget what up looks like, so that they MUST stop the world so that ONE, anyone could get off.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Meno_ » Thu Feb 11, 2021 3:11 am

Even one reader is better than one, as at times one writer is preferred to multiple.

As far as Your worth is considered, how could Dostoevsky deal with notes underground if he had nit assumed a minim reception? Some noted are retdivedong aftsr, found in bittles, where a genie has ti retrieve it? To one or some?

Really the examples show the hypocrisy of the world's reception, and One literally has to attend a Mad tea party after falling into a hole, a hike that dade not be looked into fir friar if being looked back; in order to envision weather the desire to
exclaim, " I've been down so long as to firget what up looks like, so that they MUST stop the world so that ONE, anyone could get off.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Meno_ » Thu Feb 11, 2021 3:13 am

Sorry double post.

But i really would like to continue indulging in the MS, even if as if between one security guard to another.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Thu Feb 11, 2021 3:59 am

Meno_ wrote:Sorry double post.

But i really would like to continue indulging in the MS, even if as if between one security guard to another.


okay, as long as you finish your rounds first, your nightly rounds.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Thu Feb 11, 2021 4:16 am

Berkley Babes wrote:
Meno_ wrote:Sorry double post.

But i really would like to continue indulging in the MS, even if as if between one security guard to another.


okay, as long as you finish your rounds first, your nightly rounds.


oh, and I'm finally reading Celine. Humorous tone.

Please make cents.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Meno_ » Fri Feb 12, 2021 12:00 am

soon, they may stop making them.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Fri Feb 12, 2021 3:34 pm

Meno_ wrote:soon, they may stop making them.



That sentence is a circle.

I can almost hear the fat ring of keys, jingling on their hips.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Meno_ » Sat Feb 13, 2021 11:01 pm

Berkley Babes wrote:
Meno_ wrote:soon, they may stop making them.



That sentence is a circle.

I can almost hear the fat ring of keys, jingling on their hips.




https://youtu.be/fjKp0G3dOK0
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Sat Feb 13, 2021 11:48 pm

I could use some pennies from heaven right now. I also need a big butt bitch to get my nuts kissed. But I guess I'll settle for sitting alone in a dark silent room.
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Re: American Captive

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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Sun Feb 14, 2021 8:59 am

That was some funny stuff. Thanks I needed that!
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Mon Feb 15, 2021 4:01 pm

Sorry to blow up your spot in the Determinism thread, Janis.

But my book is more revolutionary.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Mon Feb 15, 2021 5:25 pm

Was it a dick move to expose peacegirl as Janis, sure. But technically it was done in spirit of play, competition. Authors/editors.

Where does my motivation come from for doing her dirty? It has less to do with her, originally. See the first post of this thread. My link to a blog, where the story, American Captive, could be read without all the block text of an ILP post. That link was deleted by a mod.

I wasn't selling anything.

However, with peacegirl, she labeled her thread Determinism in the Philosophy forum. The topic of free will is arguably the hottest subject on ILP. And she was constantly making references to a book that she edited, which cost 24.99 on amazon. Except she made these references on the sly so she was allowed to promote navigation to other sites, away from ILP.

Hey, I love peace too girl. Peace is the highest value. But you are selling something. Good luck to you then. Eyeballs are hard to get.

My utlimate point here: I should be allowed to post a link to a free blog. Mods? :?:
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Re: American Captive

Postby MagsJ » Mon Feb 15, 2021 6:04 pm

Hear hear!
The possibility of anything we can imagine existing is endless and infinite.. - MagsJ
I haven't got the time to spend the time reading something that is telling me nothing, as I will never be able to get back that time, and I may need it for something at some point in time.. Huh! - MagsJ
You’re suggestions and I, just simply don’t mix.. like oil on water, or a really bad DJ - MagsJ
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Mon Feb 15, 2021 8:29 pm

Dear Moderators, please attach this link to the first post of this thread, if possible. Thank you.

Meno, enjoy the better version.

To everyone else, I welcome you to American Captive.


https://americancaptive.wordpress.com/
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Tue Feb 16, 2021 8:00 pm

Imma Imma Yoouuuuuu
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Tue Feb 16, 2021 10:33 pm

Imma Imma Yooouuuurrrrrrrrrrrr
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Tue Feb 16, 2021 11:21 pm

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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Tue Feb 16, 2021 11:35 pm

Flappin around like a bapkin
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Re: American Captive

Postby Meno_ » Wed Feb 17, 2021 8:25 am

Janis? If You got problems, once I exposed myself to Acturus, as Janus, she descended on me as a veritable vulture. I winder what's going with her.



But seriously. I am going to relish Your new version. Celine? He wrote America as well as if he was there, and he wasn't never set foot. I wonder how these guys do it. The other one, who dreampt he turned into a cock roach did America as well, , in fact there was a great deal of fascination with itb Dovrsak's New Symphony , and Bizet's opera Billy the Kid.

Fantasy is great, someone said a neat thing. about it.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Wed Feb 17, 2021 5:21 pm

haha whole lotta descension goin on
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Re: American Captive

Postby Meno_ » Wed Feb 17, 2021 5:54 pm

Berkley Babes wrote:haha whole lotta descension goin on




nuttin' to howl about though. My last friend surmised rivers of unrequited tears couldn't wash it.

Ms. Macbeth could only scratch away the sjin, the protruding scarlet of the flesh exposing shattered bones and scarlet sinew and the children cry , why oh why .

babe, chatterly was censored, so why worry about lack of finesses about free form, heck with special art forming free form? Its been simmering in the cauldron of witches brew long enough.

Then me filled with grief that so sadly bars further depreciating and depressing verite, for it is said"..............." While scratched his head in real lonely space, / rather be nuts kissed within it's hairy shell., or be forever reduced , awkwardly inverted umbrella cents filled and in glorious vain , vainglory pushing through the parapet.




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