Haiku Tag

Elevate form over function to get at less easily articulable truths.

Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Sun Oct 17, 2021 3:54 pm

Their shadows were long
Now and then way off future
appear from nowhere
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Pedro I Rengel » Mon Oct 18, 2021 2:35 am

Appear from nowhere
These chains, these glowing fires
This faraway call
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ierrellus » Mon Oct 18, 2021 11:57 am

This faraway call
From outside or from inside.
Who knows which is which.
"We must love one another or die." W.H.Auden
I admit I'm an asshole. Now, can we get back to the conversation?
From the mad poet of McKinley Ave.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Pedro I Rengel » Mon Oct 18, 2021 1:43 pm

Who knows which is which
Immortal demon or flesh
Burn us up a witch
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Tue Oct 19, 2021 6:36 am

Who knows which is which
good bad ugly veil's Arabs
night drown Faust's redeem
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Tue Oct 19, 2021 6:41 am

Meno_ wrote:Who knows which is which
good bad ugly veil's Arabs
night drown Faust's redeem


night drown Faust's redeem
two thousand one nights seventh
vailed mandala point
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Tue Oct 19, 2021 6:52 am

Meno_ wrote:
Meno_ wrote:Who knows which is which
good bad ugly veil's Arabs
night drown Faust's redeem


night drown Faust's redeem
two thousand one nights seventh
vailed mandala point




veiled mandala point
swell Buddha sphere circled
seventh mist spray fount
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ierrellus » Tue Oct 19, 2021 12:35 pm

Burn us up a witch--
Scapegoat for our fondest sins--
Abstract paid in full.
"We must love one another or die." W.H.Auden
I admit I'm an asshole. Now, can we get back to the conversation?
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Pedro I Rengel » Tue Oct 19, 2021 2:37 pm

Abstract paid in full
But never all of the rent
Hard knock artist's life
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Tue Oct 19, 2021 3:16 pm

Hard knock artist's life
Hart beat skip child's back to dive
Hark angel sweat eyes
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Pedro I Rengel » Tue Oct 19, 2021 3:32 pm

Hark angel sweat eyes
Ball hi other pan trinket
Defibrillator
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Tue Oct 19, 2021 5:11 pm

de-fib not under
Stand in next to love's victim
to be or ex 'ist'
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Wed Oct 20, 2021 1:52 am

Meno_ wrote:de-fib not under
Stand in next to love's victim
to be or ex 'ist'

to be or ex ist-
Marx stoned wall gives iron. men run
for money by sex
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Wed Oct 20, 2021 1:56 am

Meno_ wrote:
Meno_ wrote:de-fib not under
Stand in next to love's victim
to be or ex 'ist'

to be or ex ist-
Marx stoned wall gives iron. men run
for money by sex


for money by sex
gen it, saint French kiss prisoned
yo ko love real john
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Wed Oct 20, 2021 2:00 am

Meno_ wrote:
Meno_ wrote:
Meno_ wrote:de-fib not under
Stand in next to love's victim
to be or ex 'ist'

to be or ex ist-
Marx stoned wall gives iron. men run
for money by sex


for money by sex
gen it, saint French kiss prisoned
yo ko love real john


Let it be image
Siddharta silk madame sad
butterfly road wormed
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Pedro I Rengel » Wed Oct 20, 2021 3:23 am

To be or exist
As it happens around you
Is to train the mind
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ierrellus » Fri Oct 22, 2021 12:34 pm

Is to train the mind
Beyond all cause and effect
Found depths of Being?
"We must love one another or die." W.H.Auden
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Fri Oct 22, 2021 2:40 pm

Found depths of Being?
effected cause processed to
limits up & down ?!? !?!
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ierrellus » Sat Oct 23, 2021 1:18 pm

Limits up and down
Are mental snags in rivers
Of a freer flow.
"We must love one another or die." W.H.Auden
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Sat Oct 23, 2021 9:04 pm

Of a freer flow.
surface seems , quickly towards
anger not deep peace
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Pedro I Rengel » Sun Oct 24, 2021 11:59 pm

Anger, not deep peace
Is what I feel when I see
An inch of milk left
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Sculptor » Mon Oct 25, 2021 2:27 pm

Pedro I Rengel wrote:Anger, not deep peace
Is what I feel when I see
An inch of milk left


An inch of milk left
We Lactose intolerant
Leave it well alone
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Mon Oct 25, 2021 5:55 pm

Sculptor wrote:
Pedro I Rengel wrote:Anger, not deep peace
Is what I feel when I see
An inch of milk left


An inch of milk left
We Lactose intolerant
Leave it well alone



Leave it well alone

Where depth be measured

By love's resonance
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ierrellus » Tue Oct 26, 2021 12:48 pm

By loves resonance
All Creation still moves
To all belonging.
"We must love one another or die." W.H.Auden
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby felix dakat » Tue Oct 26, 2021 3:19 pm

To all belonging.
Temporarily, life
Is too good to waste
The purpose of my life would seem to be to express the truth as I discover it, but in such a manner that it is completely devoid of authority. By having no authority, by being seen by all as utterly unreliable, I express the truth and put everyone in a contradictory position where they can only save themselves by making the truth their own.
Soren Kierkegaard– Journals, 432
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