Haiku Tag

Elevate form over function to get at less easily articulable truths.

Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Pedro I Rengel » Sun Oct 03, 2021 4:21 am

Dreams dropping away
Into a deeper abyss
A chasm of stars
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ierrellus » Sun Oct 03, 2021 12:42 pm

A chasm of stars,
A maelstrom of darkness--
Plunge and know thyself.
"We must love one another or die." W.H.Auden
I admit I'm an asshole. Now, can we get back to the conversation?
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ierrellus » Sun Oct 03, 2021 12:46 pm

Plunge and know thyself,
inhabitant of the dark,
To feel your own depth.
"We must love one another or die." W.H.Auden
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Pedro I Rengel » Sun Oct 03, 2021 3:36 pm

To feel your own depth
Is what I want you to do
While I sit nearby
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Sun Oct 03, 2021 5:58 pm

Pedro I Rengel wrote:To feel your own depth
Is what I want you to do
While I sit nearby




While i sit nearby

on the dock of the bay yet

Buddha deep , three some



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Buddha deep, three some

Co. Janice : take another,



Piece, of my heart Crane!
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ierrellus » Sun Oct 03, 2021 6:53 pm

Buddha deep--three some
Of spirit, mind and body--
Triune unity.


Triune unity--
All parts together at last
Being harmony.
"We must love one another or die." W.H.Auden
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Sun Oct 03, 2021 8:15 pm

Ierrellus wrote:Buddha deep--three some
Of spirit, mind and body--
Triune unity.


Triune unity--
All parts together at last
Being harmony.





Tribune unity


Two versions one meaning 2(to)





Being harmony
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Pedro I Rengel » Mon Oct 04, 2021 5:31 am

Be in harmony
Young one, and remember that
Thunder always cracks
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Mon Oct 04, 2021 6:10 am

Thunder always cracks
Seventh veil not asunder
Power faced crossed twice
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Pedro I Rengel » Mon Oct 04, 2021 6:49 am

Powder-faced, crossed eyes
She used to be a goddess
Cocaine took her mind
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ierrellus » Mon Oct 04, 2021 12:48 pm

Cocaine took her mind;
An ague took her body;
Gone, not forgotten.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Mon Oct 04, 2021 2:27 pm

Gone, not forgotten.

lived philosophy showed it

On written paper
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Pedro I Rengel » Tue Oct 05, 2021 8:14 am

On written paper
Simple words, simple letters
A binding oath took
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Fixed Cross » Tue Oct 05, 2021 1:28 pm

a binding oath took
philosophy into hell
then into the Sun

RA RA RA RA RA
Capable saw a falcon
snake in its talons
The strong act as they may, the weak accept what they must.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ierrellus » Tue Oct 05, 2021 1:40 pm

Then into the sun
The mortal pendulum swings--
Excess finds the ground.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Pedro I Rengel » Tue Oct 05, 2021 2:32 pm

Excess finds, the ground
Is littered with them as we
Make our way around
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Fixed Cross » Tue Oct 05, 2021 7:45 pm

Make our way around
The crash of the satellite
To meet the rabbi
The strong act as they may, the weak accept what they must.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Fixed Cross » Mon Oct 11, 2021 1:34 pm

to meet the rabbi
the boxer got in a cab
the rain hammered down
The strong act as they may, the weak accept what they must.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Meno_ » Mon Oct 11, 2021 10:35 pm

the rain hammered down

rabbatics no doubt flows well

evil met wash off
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Pedro I Rengel » Tue Oct 12, 2021 10:58 am

Evil met, wash off
The residue of what it
Took to get to it
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Fixed Cross » Tue Oct 12, 2021 11:29 am

Took-To-Get-To-It
The son of Old Took was he
he had long red hair
The strong act as they may, the weak accept what they must.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Pedro I Rengel » Tue Oct 12, 2021 1:04 pm

He had long red hair
It occupied all her thoughts
Shaken to the core
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Sat Oct 16, 2021 3:59 pm

Shaken to the core

"Wormy" revealed his shy self.

So this is My World!
BE MELTING SNOW. WASH YOURSELF OF YOURSELF.

YOU WANDER FROM ROOM TO ROOM
HUNTING FOR THE DIAMOND NECKLACE
THAT IS ALREADY AROUND YOUR NECK!

DANCE UNTIL YOU SHATTER YOURSELF!

THERE IS A VOICE THAT DOESN'T USE WORDS. LISTEN!

LIFE IS A BALANCE BETWEEN HOLDING ON AND LETTING GO!

LET SILENCE TAKE YOU TO THE CORE OF LIFE!
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ierrellus » Sun Oct 17, 2021 12:27 pm

So this is my world--
A congregation of Is
Each claiming true sight.
"We must love one another or die." W.H.Auden
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Pedro I Rengel » Sun Oct 17, 2021 2:57 pm

Each claiming true sight
They stood in a dark circle
Their shadows were long
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