I tried rapping my own lyrics after, the result was depressing. That’s why it stops abruptly.
Goddamn, you really just can’t replace good composition. Holy sweet Jesus.
Meh what the fuck. At least it’s not on the same track or even the same post.
Actually this one was much better. Damn, it’s hard to tell when it’s fresh.
Hail
“I play the game to pass the time
I cruise and sit, relax and write some rhymes
Tryin to think of ways to make a few dimes because change is inevitable and time is dollar signs
Almost every other rapper has had their prime and now is my time
I’m tired of workin that 9 to 5
Workin on me while I still have the drive”
“Mind is hazing, my vision is fading
———E-rad-I-cation———-
Of the bodies fixation, i am forsaking
Strip the flesh of the soul,
And gaze upon the lifeless ghoul
The body without the minds a tool
I’m just another lifeless fool
Strip the flesh of the soul“
“I’m blunt as fuck with the truth
And thats all I’ll ever spit
when I step up in the booth
My motto is education and not solely fame
So if mistaken then your thinkin is lame
Enlighten a mind is why I joined the game
Why we all different and none of us the same
Truth is objective, irrespective of human method
So best respect it “
“thrice greatest stated
Enticed will made us
Its not a comfort or pleasure
It’s Just another treasure
I’ve read between the lines
And I see Gold in your eyes
watching another’s demise
What’s within you should
Never be short of the prize”
Been at it for two hours now. I prolly should have let the track breathe a tad after the chorus. But this is the best of all of them.
-edit-
I deleted it. It’s not quite ready.
But I gotta give my neighbours a rest.
Ok, I mean it’s not perfect but it’s better than I felt when I took it down.
Whatever, here it is. Something in my tone I don’t love maybe. But I think it’s good enough to show perhaps.