put your recording device closer to the speakers. and all that would have flowed better at a faster tempo and with more segues. too many stalls; you can’t afford interruptions and pauses at that tempo… it disconnects everything. not that it was bad as a monologue… but it would’ve been better if you had kept a steady meter.
“i make juice out of limes… i snort meter long lines”
“reads some books and thinks he’s better… talkin’ bout negroids wearing a biggy smalls sweater”
Rap has a way of forcin people to just say it, without so much academic window dressing.
I sort of know who you are now.
This though:
I sometimes think (ehemamconstantlyintheknowledgeof) that the side you hold as the farce or part you play is real, and what you identify with is the farce that allows you to deny the pain.
I got respect.
'p yo nose clean nigga. Don’t shy away from makin money dude like you can make it in a heartbeat. Dude like you deserves nice things.
He pulled off both Morrison and Elvis, and a gay person who isn’t a faggot but rather very suave and masculine, as Gay Perry in Shane Blacks directorial debut that revived Robert Downey jrs career, Kiss Kiss Bang Bang. Somehow that was a pivotal movie, with Superbad that year.
Right, art is the only thing magnanimous enough to deal with something as malicious as politics.
Socrates and his naive disdain for the “Gods” as he saw them
That’s in a place where the National Guard only ever goes inside to bring in the weapons and drug shipments though. So I don’t know.
I think Brian could pull it off. It takes a sort of “holy shit I’m here” perspective which you can’t afford if you come from a US gang perspectie. But Brian is just street enough and outsider enough to be able to do it. Cause you can’t sound like a bitch either.
i’ll look into it, but i might have some trouble getting a visa. got some high ranking friends in the nortenos and a few in MS-13, though. they might be able to pull some strings for me.
i need a street name though. ‘brian’ ain’t it; this is a name of scottish/irish nobility… i need something more thuggish like them hard hittin’ niggas from detroit, na mean?. i was thinking maybe MC Ashtray or DJ Indigent. or is that too silly? fuck man i’m not very good at this stuff. for me it’s just a comedy act. i need to be able to really feel it… to really be a G like dat stapped with hit hard tactics, like a fuckin’ menace, using hoes like tennis rackets, put niggas in straight-jackets. but i can’t figure out how to do it. some assistance would be greatly appreciated. don’t want to embarrass myself when i get down there, bro.
Lol, I meant write a rap about jail, up there in the US.
I’d be happy to give you a tour some day though, you’d like Caracas I think. You might be a little cocky, that could get us in trouble, but I’d be willing to take the risk.