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Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 7:52 pm
by Fixed Cross
The terror from the sky could not prevent Barbeuth from singing.

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 7:54 pm
by Fixed Cross
feel free to kill Barbeuth in the next line.

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 9:26 pm
by Stoic Guardian
You know I had this idea as well and thought of implementing it, but this one line thing is no good if your serious about it.

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 10:04 pm
by Fixed Cross
how so?

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 3:53 pm
by Pezerocles
And as the song grew, we realized that it was one with the rain.

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 4:31 pm
by Stoic Guardian
Fixed Cross wrote:how so?

Because people have the habit of intetionally fucking it up... eh we'll see.

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 4:36 pm
by Pezerocles
Stoic Guardian wrote:
Fixed Cross wrote:how so?

Because people have the habit of intetionally fucking it up... eh we'll see.

Look at the christian lady... We are prepared to deal with that.

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 4:37 pm
by Pezerocles
Come on, Stoiuc, this is right up your alley. Throw a line!

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 5:34 pm
by Stoic Guardian
You're right it is...so i will.

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 9:01 pm
by Fixed Cross
FilmSnob wrote:And as the song grew, we realized that it was one with the rain.

And we knew that our ride north was fated.

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 11:02 pm
by Stoic Guardian
So we ride(rode) through the rain, leaving the smoke behind us.

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2012 8:09 pm
by eyesinthedark
We'll face bitter cold ahead.. dangers that will make us dread...

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2012 8:38 pm
by eyesinthedark
But we carry it on.. in spite of it all.. leaving a life of ease and comfort behind us...

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2012 8:43 pm
by eyesinthedark
For who could be sure.. what treasures await.. and the adventures that might find us...

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2012 9:07 pm
by eyesinthedark
Who do we face.. what do we face.. creature with tail and firey breath?

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2012 9:08 pm
by eyesinthedark
No more an army of headless horsemen.. without honor, wisdom or depth...

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2012 11:50 pm
by statiktech
Pursuant of life and death congruent - entombed in flux of movement.

[pardon my style if it's less than artsy. My poetry usually accompanies a beat.]

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2012 6:13 pm
by Fixed Cross
Eyes, any chance you can condense these lines into one? By "one line at a time" I meant one line per poster, at a time.

Pursuant of life and death congruent - entombed in flux of movement.

I'd say this is rather exceedingly than less than artsy. I appreciate differences in style between the lines.

We rode until many prisoners had collapsed, then set up camp, and tried to make fire.

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2012 6:16 pm
by Pezerocles
The sacrifices were prepared and the Fire Masters were summoned.

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2012 6:20 pm
by Fixed Cross
Wine was poured and wounds were treated, and soon smoke began to rise.

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2012 9:58 pm
by statiktech
Give us not to the shadows in shackles, but silhouetted in battle.

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2012 10:50 pm
by Fixed Cross
We rise at daybreak.

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2012 10:04 am
by Fixed Cross
statiktech wrote:Give us not to the shadows in shackles, but silhouetted in battle.

So sounded our call to the fire, which now fed the deathly sky with smoke.

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2012 7:16 pm
by Pezerocles
As the sun began to creep over the plains and the mountains, the brotherhood had broken fast and were gathering in the Silver Quarters.

Re: Epic Poem (call for a collective project)

PostPosted: Thu May 03, 2012 12:24 am
by Fixed Cross
The Golden Heads closed in and the Emerald Eye came into focus.