American Captive

Elevate form over function to get at less easily articulable truths.

Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Wed May 27, 2020 6:21 am

Hey, down in front.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Meno_ » Wed May 27, 2020 3:13 pm

Berkley Babes wrote:Hey, down in front.




Huh? Now babes, I know You can do better then this. You're no better, by just vamping it up.



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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Wed May 27, 2020 5:04 pm

Yeah, that's what I'm after. Being better.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Wed May 27, 2020 5:13 pm

I'm the "next big thing." Hype me up. Not too much.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Wed May 27, 2020 5:16 pm

American Captive was originally posted here as Enter the Virtuplex, after first being called The Eccentric Downtown Limp.

Everybody cares.

Everybody is captivated.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Wed May 27, 2020 5:17 pm

I'm taking notes from the underground.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Wed May 27, 2020 5:55 pm

Today it's called The Subversive Text.

Just today.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Meno_ » Wed May 27, 2020 8:58 pm

Berkley Babes wrote:Today it's called The Subversive Text.

Just today.



Ok in that case....???!!!!!!....?

We don't want time to run out, especially with the thought , "What if my relief doesen't show?"


How many times can I listen to Laura Schlessinger, while reading Celine, who write about America without being here?

How subversively strange can that get next to Kafka's America?
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Wed May 27, 2020 9:22 pm

Yes, I subverted you when you entered the virtuplex, but now you are free.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Meno_ » Wed May 27, 2020 9:28 pm

Berkley Babes wrote:Yes, I subverted you when you entered the virtuplex, but now you are free.

O

Thank You I don't feel it's full consequent, however, but who said feelings matter? Vampires only feel something when they had their fill.

But no matter, ...its the same story in differing grabs
Vampires can not have a sort of alchemical repeat to the judgement of Paris.

New Orleans was a resentment to the travails of the Count of St. German.


Come on down , to the price is right , you may win something.



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Keep it coming.
Did You get the bit about my take on Laura Schlesenger? When I was alone. as a security guard, she came through , and the resonance through the fields of brain magnetic wonder revealed her affinity for Jumg. And it has stayed with within a gleaming aura, magnifying.amplifying the signs formed messages through strange and vacuous ways.

Now?

And thanks for regaining my freedom.My subversion was unpleasant and still I harbor some vestige of resentment on account of it, but it's fading.

Through the hidden mirrors of the prism within. The entrance into the virtuplex was a dog, I must admit.

But here, the light of necessity, well, its like breathing, it becomes unawares.

Just hope to remember some, of those who made me possible.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Tue Jun 02, 2020 12:02 am

Woof!
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Re: American Captive

Postby Meno_ » Tue Jun 02, 2020 12:21 am

Berkley Babes wrote:Woof!




Thanks. Except not. Some can turn around on a dime, with empathic expectance and understanding, while well knowing that it is merely a semantic, not visual game.

Some can go on scratching their heads and ask, what's the fuss all about, and become reticent about the back and forth feed , bit others must let go and not be consumed by the gravity of lightness which assumes a liberated soul.

Why can't we have both? We probably do, but necessity takes some of the fun out of it, and invites some degraded position as it's aptly described by a short novel 'How it is'.

But democratic principles well and alive in certain quarters, let's opt for the grass roots of immediate public opinion, to determine our faith, bring back the joys of self depreciation and it's opposite : overvalueing.

Woof?

Got scared for a minute of yet another rejection, not that they have not piled up over the years. Oh well, another one to add.to the collection, gathering dust.

For a starving dog, any sign of interest rings true to form, as a friendly gesture, even if being petted may signal a totally different intent.

So "Bow Vow".
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Tue Jun 02, 2020 12:42 am

The reader is mostly in trouble. Quick sand? needs better visuals....

The prescription was probably disappointing.

Did not enjoy the resolve towards reality.

maybe drugs, definitely alcohol, simply WONT quit for mental bondary testing reasons, proud about it, get your freak on

continues to watch the "all singing, all dancing crap of the world"

what kind of dog? do They like german shepards. are They waiting for tails between legs. Rejeckt
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Tue Jun 02, 2020 12:49 am

Debaser
Pixies
Got me a movie
I want you to know
Slicing up eyeballs
I want you to know
Girlie so groovy
I want you to know
Don't know about you
But I am un chien andalusia
I am un chien andalusia
I am un chien andalusia
I am un chien andalusia
Wanna grow up to be
Be a debaser
Debaser
Debaser
Debaser
Debaser
Debaser
Got me a movie
Ha ha ha ho
Slicing up eyeballs
Ha ha ha ho
Girlie so groovie
Ha ha ha ho
Don't know about you
But I am…
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Re: American Captive

Postby Meno_ » Tue Jun 02, 2020 12:56 am

The reader is mostly in trouble. Quick sand? needs better visuals....


The reader is the writer.
The writer is the reader
Reader writer writer reader rider writerreaderwriterreaderwriterreaderwriter

Don't know bout you know about you know no no nono no no bout you you you you mememe me me mimi mmmmmmmmmimmmmimmmiiiimiiiimmmiiiiiiiii

Don't matter, don't don't don't mean meen a rose is a
Rose is a miiiiiimmiii.

Stop.

Stopstop eyeballing me when you eyeball me I get mixed up u know who u uuuuuuuuu hi.
Who are you?
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Tue Jun 02, 2020 12:58 am

Dear constant Reader writer, I am your friendly friendship, keep you cozy with confessionals.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Meno_ » Tue Jun 02, 2020 1:14 am

Berkley Babes wrote:Dear constant Reader writer, I am your friendly friendship, keep you cozy with confessionals.



Removed double post.

Thanks.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Meno_ » Tue Jun 02, 2020 1:33 am

Berkley Babes wrote:Dear constant Reader writer, I am your friendly friendship, keep you cozy with confessionals.



Thanks














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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Tue Jun 02, 2020 11:12 am

Thanks for letting me share it in full with at least one person in the world.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Meno_ » Sat Jun 20, 2020 4:50 pm

Ur welcome. The world is full of confessionals, getting to know you know is a political trick of.consuming, digesting and ridding wasteful ends, the means to which , punishable by incriminating stuff.

The self derived from the outer world primarily of disinterest, A1 eventually catches up with the mundane.

After all to be human, all, two , can be shown to expire as a trick, fairly easy am endeavor, that can be disposed of by mere sleight of hand.

But, the afterglow of the twilight . haunts such self reproach, even obvious to strange err's , happen stance to come by such confessional practically from the beyond.
It is a territorial protective measure to allay the weakened price of friendship.

Still that may not yet offer a ticket to ride.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Meno_ » Sat Jun 20, 2020 4:52 pm

Meno_ wrote:Ur welcome. The world is full of confessionals, getting to know you know is a political trick of.consuming, digesting and ridding wasteful ends, the means to which , punishable by incriminating stuff.

The self derived from the outer world primarily of disinterest, A1 eventually catches up with the mundane.

After all to be human, all, two , can be shown to expire as a trick, fairly easy am endeavor, that can be disposed of by mere sleight of hand.

But, the afterglow of the twilight . haunts such self reproach, even obvious to strange err's , happen stance to come by such confessional practically from the beyond.
It is a territorial protective measure to allay the weakened price of friendship.

Still that may not yet offer a ticket to ride.




If You do not decide to take on the assignment. ....the project will destruct.


Sorry duplicate post
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Sat Jun 20, 2020 9:19 pm

Well, Meno, I just listened to American Captive using the Microsoft Word Audio feature, and it sounds CRAZY!

Do you think I should slap a cover on it? Maybe self publish it on Amazon?

Or should it just remain a guilty pleasure you like to critique on ILP? :-"

Kind of a dangerous decision, huh?
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Sat Jun 20, 2020 9:44 pm

Berkley Babes wrote:Well, Meno, I just listened to American Captive using the Microsoft Word Audio feature, and it sounds CRAZY!

Do you think I should slap a cover on it? Maybe self publish it on Amazon?

Or should it just remain a guilty pleasure you like to critique on ILP? :-"

Kind of a dangerous decision, huh?


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Re: American Captive

Postby Meno_ » Sat Jun 20, 2020 10:23 pm

Berkley Babes wrote:Well, Meno, I just listened to American Captive using the Microsoft Word Audio feature, and it sounds CRAZY!


Can't say, but one thing, ignorance at times proves expedient.

And in any case , to be perfectly honest, rarely does any one know the difference.

Do you think I should slap a cover on it? Maybe self publish it on Amazon?

Or should it just remain a guilty pleasure you like to critique on ILP? :-"

Kind of a dangerous decision, huh?




Can't say, but one thing, ignorance at times proves expedient.

And in any case , to be perfectly honest, rarely does any one know the difference.


Decisions are rarely dangerous until they are made.
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Re: American Captive

Postby Berkley Babes » Sat Jun 20, 2020 10:27 pm

Meno_ wrote:
Berkley Babes wrote:Well, Meno, I just listened to American Captive using the Microsoft Word Audio feature, and it sounds CRAZY!


Can't say, but one thing, ignorance at times proves expedient.

And in any case , to be perfectly honest, rarely does any one know the difference.

Do you think I should slap a cover on it? Maybe self publish it on Amazon?

Or should it just remain a guilty pleasure you like to critique on ILP? :-"

Kind of a dangerous decision, huh?




Can't say, but one thing, ignorance at times proves expedient.

And in any case , to be perfectly honest, rarely does any one know the difference.


Sounds like a vote to keep it underground.

You have exited the Virtuplex. Hope you had an interesting trip.
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