The Fall Into Mind

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The Fall Into Mind

Postby Ierrellus » Mon Dec 23, 2019 5:43 pm

Adam, Eve and Serpent still remain
As latent voices in the latest brain.
Echoing the history of our kind,
From matter's first evolving into mind.
"We must love one another or die." W.H.Auden
I admit I'm an asshole. Now, can we get back to the conversation?
From the mad poet of McKinley Ave.
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Re: The Fall Into Mind

Postby Ierrellus » Tue Dec 24, 2019 6:33 pm

Embedded creativity has no end.
This legacy is yours and mine, my friend.
The stuff of stars incarnate in the Earth!--
What more could anyone need as proof of worth?
"We must love one another or die." W.H.Auden
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Re: The Fall Into Mind

Postby Meno_ » Wed Dec 25, 2019 7:09 pm

accidental tourist.the heart beating center of Europe accidents happen fall into or. a head of it's time
Visions by fear misbegotten
The nation under God
Befallen thus
To You.

Through although.through and through


bi pygmalion's craze
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Re: The Fall Into Mind

Postby Ierrellus » Thu Dec 26, 2019 2:25 pm

I was writing pantheistic poetry at age 19. The current verses are inspired by Dowd"s "Thank God For Evolution".
"We must love one another or die." W.H.Auden
I admit I'm an asshole. Now, can we get back to the conversation?
From the mad poet of McKinley Ave.
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Re: The Fall Into Mind

Postby Meno_ » Thu Dec 26, 2019 3:58 pm

References flung far
and wide, pygmalion from a sculptor
derives, the sculpture behold an object of love,

Far and wide did it derive, my fair,
lady,

That crazy hungarian, through, the accent

as embellished transcription
of some inner muse.


Does accidens l such muses evoke sentiments of
being there,

Or is it mere coincidence that mind"shame over extending it's restraint
to appear in break from it, or inform,

contradict & form more closely, a more perfect union?

and express Herself as nearer yet of intentions more aligned?

Where do apparition and supposition more closely resemble , of by chance or warring memory , by fortitude reappear, in favor of,

But in the care for love's lasting pantheon feather like drifted into it's parthenon.
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Re: The Fall Into Mind

Postby Meno_ » Thu Dec 26, 2019 4:42 pm

Ierrellus wrote:I was writing pantheistic poetry at age 19. The current verses are inspired by Dowd"s "Thank God For Evolution".



Your poem was the inspiration where the apple found from the tree too wide an array, per chance
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