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But yeah and

PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2018 1:39 am
by Fixed Cross
But yeah and I mean, hey.
Didn't she?
Oghh, come own.
Sirrisly.
Cant.
Cant. Just!
Cant.

Cum Onnnn!!
Nah.


Hey Jesus, man

Do some cooking!
Less talking.
okay?

BAM

(he now lies on the ground bleeding from a head wound)

Jesus why you had to do that for.

Eh I didn't. He did it.
Sucking my fucking nerves.

Okay but what now?
Whadya wanna do with im?

Eh, cook im.

Re: But yeah and

PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2018 1:55 pm
by MagsJ
I like the vagueness of a piece, that leaves the door open for interpretation.

Some can't handle that...

Re: But yeah and

PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2018 10:20 pm
by Fixed Cross
I,


was also a person

once
in the river



fishes

I remember they pretty

fishes pretty
fishes


oh fishes pretty fish

hey, I remember!

I... I - re mem, ber!



Hey, a boat.

Life vests
Lets make a sunrise



*
CHAPTER 2



Damn she is late she glides over the tramrails almost slips she wears the umbrella like it is the rain she wards off, he drinks coffee and slurps oh he feels his morals loosening. Here she comes haha there she is. Look at those perks. Come on baby Ive got a table right here
so grateful she is.

Hey, you are here.
Holding hands over the table to get warm and sane.

So when we talk, we see colonial houses passing by seen from the gondola, it is for the picking and choosing. Fishes for dinner tonight are the love of the life the white wine this time it approaches softness the right way which is rare o, so rare.

Re: But yeah and

PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2018 1:27 am
by Meno_
Really draws you in.