The woman with two husbands and the man with two

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The woman with two husbands and the man with two

Postby Meno_ » Sun Feb 19, 2017 10:34 pm

Backwards only can do. For privacy. Concise, out of. System without wave making.
Lovely she was. Many years ago, different culture.
He:broken. Long time, ago.
What he wanted was family , love, given up on most everything else.


Start from back to front. Make sense even if leaving most or some out. Memory problem.

Promised to love and obey, till death to us part.


start with now.

The other husband moved in.

Yesterday, his young daughter showed up, he just getting out of hernia surgery, had a row with surgeon, cause obsession of not waking up. They settled with just enough propofol, and a lot of Fentamil.

Lots of pain laying on couch.

Youngest daughter comes over.

With grandson 2 years, Aiden. Quite as can be.
He plays , wants nutcracker belonged to his youngest son now past. He wants it.

2nd husband comes out starts playing, up to the kid, while he is telling her ,can't come over this week cause doc told him can't lift kid on account of the hernia operation, for at least a month.

2nd husband is cutsie pying with kid, and cooing saying I love you little kid, in spite of, having own two or three wives back in the old country. One set of twins didn't make it, but he says he loved them anyway, cause they were his. His number one wife, was also left behind, one of whose five sons are here, looking for a job.

He is a good kid of nearly fifty years old, the youngest. Now the number two husband's brother who went to Alaska and has not been seen since, got a job fishing up there, but that was 40 years ago, when his wife was married to him.

So he comes out playing with the baby, and the baby was big, that's why he can't pick him up, that is the first husband, and he lays in bed groaning worrying about his bowl movement since narcotic caused a blockage, and he is worried about a re-rupture.

Bottom line he is thinking about also, going back to the old country, but last visit just reminded him of the green grass being greener there, an old fallacy.


So 2nd husband is shooting the breeze about how he was a black belt back 50 years ago, blah blah blah, and he sings, and first husband says sing something, and he says I have it recorded, and plays it a kind of nostalgic trip into the various love channels he seemed to sustain all these years.

the kid wants to get away from his grip. And the first husband, will call him chump, says nothing but thinks only of the balance, he is way way heavier, therefore he has a tremendous karmic advantage against the first husband whom we shall call bump.

Literally bumped around, and bumped around, and now living with them, with his youngest son.

Then comes a kind of morphic slashing with the knives of cruelty; how could you warm up to this ibniscebt child, while admitting that you never saw the twins, who died, and you say you loved them.

He emvraces chump's daughter, and wraps his black belted arms around her.

CLINCHER there is as always, how can he do it? To taunt, chump says, hey bump, while I am layer up, maybe you can go over and take care of the kid?
Who has since managed to escape the arms that held him.

Meanwhile Bump's son comes out and offers to cook something, and Chump accepts, even though familiar of poisoning in bump's cultural heritage.

They end up pals, chump realistic about had weight favoring bump by sheer numbers, but believing of the weight of the soul, proven by song by the last concert given by the WHO inSan Francisco, back in 1969 think it was in the Fremont, where the event's signature was 'The Weight',how prophetic Chump thought.

So here they are measuring weights,and the only central heavy weight is SHE with whom both are in love. Well not exactly. Bump has a lot to ride on this one being homeless and all, with her very good central position as the vertex of all her perceived responsibility, which she has set up as the leader of the cult.

For thi and her feminine vulnerability,
, her other side consisting of a weak soul needing a buttress of very weighty and insolvent massive responsibility, which is shared, he loves her like crazy, and many times accusingly she points a wagging forefinger at him:brother are you crazy to love me.

And she is as crazy as he is, for having as many husbands, but he is no angel, for his make lover, is his only counterweight against this simingly accurately calibrated delicate balance.

SO HE DECIDES NOW to let things take their course, because, things are veering out of control.
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Re: The woman with two husbands and the man with two

Postby Meno_ » Sun Feb 19, 2017 10:53 pm

How can a delicate flower harbor such a enormous force within her breast, he muses, when her hear has so long carried the hypocrisy planted in her long long time ago through a generational gravity which offers no respite or escape from the chains of karmic cause and effect?

For Chump really loves her in spite of the second husband's intolerable intolerance, he even finds him funnily pitiful, for trying to wedge into situations, where he could easily return to a veritable harem?

Chump thinks escapism much of the time, thinks of San Francisco, and a aHaight no longer there, except maybe only as a signpost, without the flowers, and the love, remain only some old headship with blaring and glaring reminders!

Or, overseas somewhere, where a small monthly check goes a lot farther, at least for now, where the only obstacle could be the inexcused akienation perceived by the natives as an unjust life of taking advantage of the higher currency exchange, lop siding values into spirals of unreality. How to anesthetise the difference of values into mutual acceptability without ruining a liver so busy with cleansing the system of alcohol? That would only mean an absurd reduction of escaping an escape a running away with no end.

No, Chump could do that here as well, to calm and smash the love for his woman of almost thirty years.
Can't be done, he concludes, has to live with the thought, and the actual cohabitating presence of the second husband.
No ifs about it, when he has even a drop of liquor, she becomes he victim , he the subtly controlling
monster.

So he muses upon these and other things, the wind alarming all outside , a weird storm, arising from a beautiful and placid day before, Chump needs her, and thinks the black belted Dump is easy pray for his clutches, by turning his defiance into the other cheek. a very shrewd and calculated move, if ever there was one.
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Re: The woman with two husbands and the man with two

Postby Meno_ » Sun Feb 19, 2017 11:16 pm

Calls her, tells her this and that, but she is cold, does not pick up. Chump fights it, fights the appalling obsessive return to some prior state, forgiving, but maybe they reached an impasse here, she knows now feelings will see saw with thoughts, accusations, binges,..l.....

Is she in it for another bout?

She called Bump several times, he was not there, his phone kept ringing, he was tempted to pick it up.

And both of his daughters telling him mom really loves You. And now, opened the piggy bank which we saved for next Xmas, quarters and dimes at a time, Chump figures, no more booze left, she took his car, but must go down to the liquor store, there is nothing left up here, and the storm is raging outside, plus I can heardly walk the day after surgery. But he needs something. An anesthetic to take the place of the Fentanol, Ibufrovin is a sad substitute.
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Re: The woman with two husbands and the man with twobt

Postby Meno_ » Mon Feb 20, 2017 12:09 am

A lot has happened since Chump went off this forum. But to make things short, she gave him a call after apologizing to seventh heaven, to having hurt her, she returned her call, and sounded as if he , Chump, was forgiven. Releived, he reclined the debt owed to the colonized, and that it had to do something with this,and his pledge, to honor and defend this marriage, said o the death. , Chump as relieved when she called, and sounded like nothing really happened, of importance, oh I love her for that said Chump.

Hen people talk about the Mexicans coming into the USA illegally, I think of them surrendering at the conclusion of the Spanish American War, Mexico loosing one half of her territory to the US, and now, maybe the Mexicans thinking, that in times of hardship, it may be convenient for the US to remind themselves of the shifting boundaries in the sand, whereas , bounderiesvmay not be, as they say, written in granite.
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Re: The woman with two husbands and the man with two

Postby Meno_ » Mon Feb 20, 2017 12:19 am

So, identity, strung out between the shifting boundaries of diplomatic futility, need a rest in times of trouble, for those who have atrung them up in the first place, and we need to be not hypocritical about the otgwr side of capital investiture, VI's: that of colonialism, no. One conjoins the other, and the veracity of one, need not declaw the other, out of a hidden subterfuge,

And so Chump's thoughts veered, Zander Bump came home, they enbraced,and thought of betterimes. Meanwhile SHE called, not giving the slight of hint of his affrontery, and tgingsvseemingoy, back on track. He was releived, however worried that she will notice the alcohol on his breath, the source of which, was not caused by any trip down to the liquor store, but a discovery of a bottle left as a Christmas gift , forgotten,still in wrappers m on He kitchen table.
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Re: The woman with two husbands and the man with two

Postby Meno_ » Mon Feb 20, 2017 12:28 am

By this time, it may become obvious to the dear reader, that any gramattical mistakes, may need a morning after of sobriety to repair, and so, I beg your forgiveness, for the time span, within which, this may become possible.


In case you are wondering, why such rapid recovery for this afterword became possible, without the aforementioned mistakes, it is because, everything possible was done to block,the effects of , and that corresponds to my earnest effort to stay within the confines which describe literacy. Thanks.
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Re: The woman with two husbands and the man with two

Postby Meno_ » Fri Feb 24, 2017 1:51 am

Then Chump decided to lay low, and put up with all the husbands, because he knew is his sinews that that jealousy hurts the jealous most, not the one being jealous of.

And what of the Old Country? Almost bought a condo there, and he knew, the mathematician talked it out of him, because his whole family on his father's side did not like him, nor his mother, and he told them actually why Old Dad married mom. It was a love of a mind, yes, but it had political overtones, rationalizations. To start with his mother was a catch. A catch , that a very quizzical landed gentry could land, he being over thirty, his last lover a German soldier, before fascism became unfashionable, after say , 1943, when the tide turned.

Convenient also, from the most important turn of events, that of the changes of regime.

So little boy , do not grieve, for your mom and dad, the Europe of long gone now divided between the guilt and the compensation of fruitful immigration, has been body politic since 1945, an atonement of sorts, no wonder Europe abhors an opened scab caused by the injuries of ages old desire to return to grand old Vienna with its wine, women and song.
The slow time waltz, was surely relegated to the dustbins of those, who seem to discount a resurrection of magic and wonder in the eternal visage of the deep blue forested night?

Who dare?

Except those whose mind turns on the anthitetical ,the age old prolegmia of opposites? Of a hope inwarranted of a night of eternal spring.

Rites of which resonate like Nijinsky's rose,but only more and no dread, cause his problem solved into echoes of phantastic idioms swirling around orbs of
specific aura?

Have you lived the life of the cave, being in it, for so many years, your only illumination the neon throbbing of a Chinese laundry and spiking on acid, lying on a very intricately woven oriental rug, and with the music of tapestry, and wishing to meet Neil Cassidy, but only Serling with Maggie Cassidy?

Very intricately woven, when out of a bar Stampede late night, buzzing your Honda to a friend, and he wanted to play ghost in the dark park, only the song brown eyed lady can spoke of, and change reels, and in the mode of future perfect asked the same from his youngest son Chris, if he wanted to go to the bluest black of blue parks, and groove, and he said no, let's go to the Madrid restaurant diwn the street, and he said no, what's there?


A full house darkly lit, no Wagnerian magic there, only the hushed murmurs of damask, clanging silver, and phony politeness.

What else is new my dear, here, in the world of the bizarre, the ridiculous, and the absurd?
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Re: The woman with two husbands and the man with two

Postby Ultimate Philosophy 1001 » Fri Feb 24, 2017 3:54 pm

Im more interesting in seeing the hermaphrodite with 2 penises bang her hot lesbian girlfriend.
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