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spiderwebs

Postby esperanza1 » Sat Jan 21, 2017 4:47 am

Ideas spinning
silvery white
entraptions, and illusions
no prey tonight
I'll stay hiding
in moonlight
waiting till the time is right
I'm looking for the perfect place
to spin a Web
of sticky silvery thread
Where a connection is made
and if your not
looking out
you might not escape
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Re: spiderwebs

Postby Arcturus Descending » Wed Mar 22, 2017 2:25 pm

esperanza1 wrote:Ideas spinning
silvery white
entraptions, and illusions
no prey tonight
I'll stay hiding
in moonlight
waiting till the time is right
I'm looking for the perfect place
to spin a Web
of sticky silvery thread
Where a connection is made
and if your not
looking out
you might not escape


I like that. Is it about a spider or about yourself? :evilfun:

I'll stay hiding
in moonlight
waiting till the time is right


Nice imagery. I could see him.
"Look closely. The beautiful may be small."


"Two things fill the mind with ever new and increasing admiration and awe, the oftener and more steadily we reflect on them: the starry heavens above me and the moral law within me."


“Whereas the beautiful is limited, the sublime is limitless, so that the mind in the presence of the sublime, attempting to imagine what it cannot, has pain in the failure but pleasure in contemplating the immensity of the attempt.”

Immanuel Kant
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Re: spiderwebs

Postby esperanza1 » Sun Apr 15, 2018 6:51 pm

Arcturus Descending wrote:
esperanza1 wrote:Ideas spinning
silvery white
entraptions, and illusions
no prey tonight
I'll stay hiding
in moonlight
waiting till the time is right
I'm looking for the perfect place
to spin a Web
of sticky silvery thread
Where a connection is made
and if your not
looking out
you might not escape


I like that. Is it about a spider or about yourself? :evilfun:

I'm working on my poetry ;)

I'll stay hiding
in moonlight
waiting till the time is right


Nice imagery. I could see him.


Thank you, Arcturus :) I don't consider myself a poet. I usually keep my writings raw, and somewhat defined, and to myself. This one is attached to my memories, the theme light and darkness. I once had a spider in my backyard too, that I would visit.

Also about healing.

I have enjoyed many of your poems, the one about the Arcturus brings back fun imagery :)
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Re: spiderwebs

Postby esperanza1 » Mon Apr 16, 2018 4:59 pm

After posting this last year, it was odd that I had noticed alot of spiders for a couple of months.
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