The Third Rhone

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The Third Rhone

Postby D3R7 » Wed Nov 23, 2016 8:56 am

Yet another Spring afternoon shone over the inner city skyline, the golden rays of the Sun in its clear blue sky above reflecting off the smooth stone footways below. Buskers performing highway classics with a drum machine and electric guitar are nevertheless upstaged by a group of Hari Krishnas getting Indian towards disbelievers hell bent on passing the livewire by. As usual, Daintree Gus and mates Afghan Sam and Greeko Troy play three verbose yet decent guys to the passing crowd...

(to be continued)
Do you, by virtue of possessing grace in the natural order of things, feel above and beyond your fellow man?
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Re: The Third Rhone

Postby D3R7 » Thu Nov 24, 2016 4:04 am

...The three friends decided to peruse the nearest shopping hive and grab something to eat. The white marble décor of the mega mall belied not just affluence but real classical taste. Cheeseburgers and fried chicken competed with squidge and cous cous in the seemingly endless food court. Hours passed before it was time to go again but the night was still young: it was only 9 o'clock.
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Re: The Third Rhone

Postby 1mpious » Wed Aug 09, 2017 5:52 pm

*bump*

Whatever happened to D3R7? I liked his style... :(
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