My poem.

Elevate form over function to get at less easily articulable truths.

My poem.

Postby GreatandWiseTrixie » Sun Aug 23, 2015 7:36 pm

(background music) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wxbdB4UYjT8

The depth of my pain knows no bounds

People talking about suicide like they actually care

Talking about the feelings of beautiful people

What's right and wrong, how people need to be treated, how girls really feel

I must suck up my feelings, they dont care about me or my ideal

I hate the beautiful people

I am green like envy, I want them all to die

The depth of my envy knows no bounds

Envy gives me power, gives me crowns

Don't liken me to clowns, I only want them to have frowns

Does it make me a bad person if I want to slit your throat?

Do the world a favor and jump off a boat

I know I should be grateful

History always repeats itself, its shameful, nature is a death and pain machine

If your miserable like me

Does a dog still bite once let free?

Open your eyes and see
I am losing my mind to mandess.
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Re: My poem.

Postby Erik_ » Sun Aug 23, 2015 7:43 pm

Duality, balance, yin-yang.

Reality has a way of balancing itself out via opposites.

Feminine seeks masculine, masculine seeks feminine.

The black void seeks animation, hyper-animation, like MyLil'Pony, to restore it back to life...
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Re: My poem.

Postby Orbie » Sun Aug 23, 2015 7:45 pm

good one, trix, Maldoror redux
[size=50][/size]Allone's Obe issance



In answer to your prayer
sincere, the centre of
your circle here,
i stand ; and , without
taking thought,-
i know nothing. But i can

Full well your need-as
you be men
This: Re-Creation. With a
bow,
Then, your obedient

servant now.
One gift is all i find in me,
And that is faithful
memory
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Re: My poem.

Postby GreatandWiseTrixie » Sun Aug 23, 2015 7:51 pm

Primal Rage wrote:The black void seeks animation, hyper-animation, like MyLil'Pony, to restore it back to life...


I am black death itself.

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Re: My poem.

Postby Orbie » Sun Aug 23, 2015 8:08 pm

what does it take? (to animate)
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In answer to your prayer
sincere, the centre of
your circle here,
i stand ; and , without
taking thought,-
i know nothing. But i can

Full well your need-as
you be men
This: Re-Creation. With a
bow,
Then, your obedient

servant now.
One gift is all i find in me,
And that is faithful
memory
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Re: My poem.

Postby GreatandWiseTrixie » Sun Aug 23, 2015 8:09 pm

Orbie wrote:what does it take? (to animate)


A free mind.
I am losing my mind to mandess.
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Re: My poem.

Postby Erik_ » Sun Aug 23, 2015 8:10 pm

GreatandWiseTrixie wrote:
Primal Rage wrote:The black void seeks animation, hyper-animation, like MyLil'Pony, to restore it back to life...


I am black death itself.

(background music) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NMIVdTnvfzg


You are Thanos, destroyer of the universe!

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Re: My poem.

Postby Orbie » Sun Aug 23, 2015 8:11 pm

can i free it, can you? from what? it is always some thing that's bolcking. (analyze this)
[size=50][/size]Allone's Obe issance



In answer to your prayer
sincere, the centre of
your circle here,
i stand ; and , without
taking thought,-
i know nothing. But i can

Full well your need-as
you be men
This: Re-Creation. With a
bow,
Then, your obedient

servant now.
One gift is all i find in me,
And that is faithful
memory
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Re: My poem.

Postby GreatandWiseTrixie » Sun Aug 23, 2015 8:12 pm

Orbie wrote:can i free it, can you? from what? it is always some thing that's bolcking. (analyze this)


I am no sage.
I am losing my mind to mandess.
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Re: My poem.

Postby Orbie » Sun Aug 23, 2015 8:12 pm

destroyer with his achilles heel, every body has one.
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In answer to your prayer
sincere, the centre of
your circle here,
i stand ; and , without
taking thought,-
i know nothing. But i can

Full well your need-as
you be men
This: Re-Creation. With a
bow,
Then, your obedient

servant now.
One gift is all i find in me,
And that is faithful
memory
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Re: My poem.

Postby GreatandWiseTrixie » Sun Aug 23, 2015 8:13 pm

Orbie wrote:destroyer with his achilles heel, every body has one.


My Achilles heels are many, and they give me the power to destroy.
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Re: My poem.

Postby Orbie » Sun Aug 23, 2015 8:23 pm

THE DUTCH BOY WITH ALL HIS FINGERS IN THE HOLES IN THE DAM, YET, IT HAS BEEN BLOCKED, IT STILL,
STANDS.
The world will pass away, but my words shall not.
[size=50][/size]Allone's Obe issance



In answer to your prayer
sincere, the centre of
your circle here,
i stand ; and , without
taking thought,-
i know nothing. But i can

Full well your need-as
you be men
This: Re-Creation. With a
bow,
Then, your obedient

servant now.
One gift is all i find in me,
And that is faithful
memory
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Re: My poem.

Postby GreatandWiseTrixie » Sun Aug 23, 2015 8:40 pm

Orbie wrote:THE DUTCH BOY WITH ALL HIS FINGERS IN THE HOLES IN THE DAM, YET, IT HAS BEEN BLOCKED, IT STILL,
STANDS.
The world will pass away, but my words shall not.

Unless they are inscribed in stone, they shall.
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Re: My poem.

Postby Orbie » Sun Aug 23, 2015 9:54 pm

And yet, no stone will be left unturned- Mark 13:1-3
[size=50][/size]Allone's Obe issance



In answer to your prayer
sincere, the centre of
your circle here,
i stand ; and , without
taking thought,-
i know nothing. But i can

Full well your need-as
you be men
This: Re-Creation. With a
bow,
Then, your obedient

servant now.
One gift is all i find in me,
And that is faithful
memory
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Re: My poem.

Postby ended6 » Sun Aug 30, 2015 3:57 am

Omg, who let the loony girl out of the asylum again, I sure hope she is still locked up and pushed this "poem" (collection of death threats) through the gap of the barred window..and the wind just happened to blow it over this way..which is concrete proof that the government needs to put more money into the asylum's security features..knowing what exactly is locked up inside!
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Re: My poem.

Postby GreatandWiseTrixie » Mon Aug 31, 2015 2:37 am

mannequin wrote:Omg, who let the loony girl out of the asylum again, I sure hope she is still locked up and pushed this "poem" (collection of death threats) through the gap of the barred window..and the wind just happened to blow it over this way..which is concrete proof that the government needs to put more money into the asylum's security features..knowing what exactly is locked up inside!


Youd be the first to go in it, mr. selfproclaimedsociopath who get's off on beating up women. Nothing wrong with it, but I cannot stand traitorous hypocrits, they are a disgrace. I guess we live in a world full of them, it's the insane controlling the insane after all. Also you are first on my special list of love too.
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Re: My poem.

Postby ended6 » Mon Aug 31, 2015 11:43 am

GreatandWiseTrixie wrote:
mannequin wrote:Omg, who let the loony girl out of the asylum again, I sure hope she is still locked up and pushed this "poem" (collection of death threats) through the gap of the barred window..and the wind just happened to blow it over this way..which is concrete proof that the government needs to put more money into the asylum's security features..knowing what exactly is locked up inside!


Youd be the first to go in it, mr. selfproclaimedsociopath who get's off on beating up women. Nothing wrong with it, but I cannot stand traitorous hypocrits, they are a disgrace. I guess we live in a world full of them, it's the insane controlling the insane after all. Also you are first on my special list of love too.


Where did I ever claim to be a sociopath? ... I would never claim to be such a thing because..why would I? ..I can empathize with them, I guess..but it's not something I think of regularly..people have their existence..who cares?..

Yeah you're right about "getting off on beating women", and ironically, that quote sounds incredibly modern...You know, why? ..because it doesn't sound anything like me at all!..well, not in the way you put it..I would say deriving sexual and emotional pleasure from interacting aggressively, whether it be me doing it or it being done to me...basically, it's a bond, a very loving bond..I don't expect anybody to understand.. and then they will just instantly compare me to a jealous husband that batters his wife..

hun, jealousy bores me, husbands bore me, wives bore me.. and the prison term also bores me, the nuclear family bores me, the kids bore me..the holidays bore me....it all so typical, or should we call it basic?..

it's odd that you would even bring that up, like it's a big deal? ....it's not something i have ever doubted as unnatural because it has always been there since I was born....Yeah, i might come across as slightly "odd" but that is largely due to nobody really understanding sexuality and the emotional and physical way i happen to exist in..it's not just women neither, its about the energy of the person, i guess..the way in which they are..the reality.

Yeah, you're right, you would find somebody like me heavily locked up in such a place, but that doesn't necessarily mean I somehow DESERVE to be in there..even beyond so called criminal acts at that point too...it's nothing to do with anybody what i get up to..literally anybody...other than the person it's being done to and sometimes not even them......Everything else is just somebody's else's opinion...now those opinions may manifest into buildings, laws.. and ..stuff...but it's still just an opinion..I don't see why this is hard to understand..these people breathe the same air as me..
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Re: My poem.

Postby GreatandWiseTrixie » Sat Sep 05, 2015 5:10 pm

Like Ecmandu said some people don't deserve to breathe air...

Let me ask you this...mr. I am a sick twisted modern predator, emotional manipulating, social engineering, ruthlessly pirating, sexually perverting human exploiter...or social Darwinian natural selector, abusive womanizer, anarcho socialist criminal organizer, rape apologist, deadly weaponry collector, misogynistic chauvinist pig, ravenous wolf, antihuman misanthrope, reclusive strategist, king of the damned, emotional vampiric kingdom constructor, everyday racist, white supremacist, Machiavellist...

Your words not mine.
What makes you think you are so special?
You are traitor, you have the nerve to call non-conformists guilty of punishment. You are a house nigger, a witch who sides with the Inquisitors.
I am losing my mind to mandess.
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Re: My poem.

Postby MnonoaN » Wed Sep 16, 2015 1:15 pm

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