Fizz

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Fizz

Postby Oughtist » Sat Jun 06, 2015 11:09 pm

the carbonation bub
bles from the bot
tom of the bot
tle, living a
complet
e life
.
Things are apparent.
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Re: Fizz

Postby Ierrellus » Mon Jun 08, 2015 1:44 pm

Good poem. I like how the placing of the words fits the message.
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Re: Fizz

Postby Byanconny » Thu Jul 16, 2015 10:25 am

I could not see its shape. Please offer a broad it?
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