Dark blue words above name & place in time

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Dark blue words above name & place in time

Postby Gamer » Mon Apr 27, 2015 9:05 am

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Reflections on a theme in Bela Stena
by
Arturus Descending

Sat

Apr 04

2015

6:39 pm

(why does the 9 make me weep?)
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Re: Dark blue words above name & place in time

Postby Gamer » Mon Apr 27, 2015 9:33 am

Ok not really weep.
But it makes me imagine myself weeping,
and yet makes me too apathetic and detached
to be capable of weeping all in one fell swoop.
Makes me want to try and also makes me want to give up, in one swoop. It's 3 am and we all have feet. We all have lonely spaces between our toes and we have or particular blankets with their patterns and feel. We have a longest fingernail. And we have our 9. Endless 9s. And 7s and 3s. And spoons. Do you remember the last spoon you used? It's somewhere right now. We all have a last spoon, I imagine a box containing all the last spoons of everybody reading this right now. The spoons are I guess spooning. We all have a memory of seeing empire strikes back. We all have a memory of our mom giving us chocolate milk. At some point it flickers on and then off and we are just marching trumpets all lost and this is where it breaks down....marching trumpets makes sense to me, but not to you. So I stop here.
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