Haiku Tag

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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby felix dakat » Mon Apr 19, 2010 3:04 am

to be physical
or not to be physical
that is the question

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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby PavlovianModel146 » Mon Apr 19, 2010 4:07 am

That is the question,
But does it have an answer,
Another question?
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Oughtist » Mon Apr 19, 2010 5:40 am

Another question,
another windmill tilted
at holy grails dreamt
Things are apparent.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby krossie » Mon Apr 19, 2010 4:08 pm

at holy grails dreamt
and windmills tiltified at
Don Quixote hit that!
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"How do you just live?"
Marilyn Monroe - Misfits

"I roll about in myself."
De Montaigne

"where philosophy ends - it's still fun to make random kind of clicky noises"
Krossie

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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Oughtist » Mon Apr 19, 2010 9:01 pm

(Don [-X ) Quixote hit that
episodic chaos sought
in a woman's eyes

EDIT: hmm, then again, is it Key-hoe-tay or Key-haute? Maybe that Don does belong, krossie... I know it's quick-saw-tic, but but maybe not so much so with the proper name. :-k
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Che » Tue Apr 20, 2010 2:56 am

In a woman's eyes
vulnerable prey, focused
attack is coming
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Anthem » Tue Apr 20, 2010 7:01 am

Attack is coming
It is the black beast of "AH!"
More back of the throat
-anthem
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby krossie » Tue Apr 20, 2010 10:49 am

No I reckon the ball was dropped there :oops: !

Here's an apology one!


More back of the throat
than contrary-wise by rote
careful when you quote

kp
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"How do you just live?"
Marilyn Monroe - Misfits

"I roll about in myself."
De Montaigne

"where philosophy ends - it's still fun to make random kind of clicky noises"
Krossie

"..just another good example of how the philosophical insane asylum started by Nietzsche is being run by the inmates."
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Tue Apr 20, 2010 2:29 pm

krossie wrote:

More back of the throat
than contrary-wise by rote
careful when you quote


careful when you quote
Haiku must not rhyme, tis true?
poetic restraint?
:lol: :banana-dance:
“How can a bird that is born for joy
Sit in a cage and sing?”
― William Blake


“Little Fly
Thy summers play,
My thoughtless hand
Has brush'd away.

Am not I
A fly like thee?
Or art not thou
A man like me?

For I dance
And drink & sing:
Till some blind hand
Shall brush my wing.

If thought is life
And strength & breath:
And the want
Of thought is death;

Then am I
A happy fly,
If I live,
Or if I die”
― William Blake, Songs of Innocence and of Experience


“No bird soars too high if he soars with his own wings.”
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby krossie » Tue Apr 20, 2010 4:02 pm

Nice!

poetic restraint?
Forsooth Ifeel very faint!
careful with the paint
~[krossie]~

"How do you just live?"
Marilyn Monroe - Misfits

"I roll about in myself."
De Montaigne

"where philosophy ends - it's still fun to make random kind of clicky noises"
Krossie

"..just another good example of how the philosophical insane asylum started by Nietzsche is being run by the inmates."
Jonquil

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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Tue Apr 20, 2010 6:11 pm

krossie wrote:Nice!

poetic restraint?
Forsooth Ifeel very faint!
careful with the paint
:lol: krossie is...

careful with the paint
But a stubborn little mule
to rhyme - but so cute!!!!
:evilfun:
“How can a bird that is born for joy
Sit in a cage and sing?”
― William Blake


“Little Fly
Thy summers play,
My thoughtless hand
Has brush'd away.

Am not I
A fly like thee?
Or art not thou
A man like me?

For I dance
And drink & sing:
Till some blind hand
Shall brush my wing.

If thought is life
And strength & breath:
And the want
Of thought is death;

Then am I
A happy fly,
If I live,
Or if I die”
― William Blake, Songs of Innocence and of Experience


“No bird soars too high if he soars with his own wings.”
― William Blake
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby krossie » Tue Apr 20, 2010 6:23 pm

to rhyme - but so cute
is extremely difficult
and so hard to boot!
~[krossie]~

"How do you just live?"
Marilyn Monroe - Misfits

"I roll about in myself."
De Montaigne

"where philosophy ends - it's still fun to make random kind of clicky noises"
Krossie

"..just another good example of how the philosophical insane asylum started by Nietzsche is being run by the inmates."
Jonquil

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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Tue Apr 20, 2010 6:26 pm

krossie wrote:to rhyme - but so cute
is extremely difficult
and so hard to boot!


and so hard to boot!
If not the rock - the pebble
Ach - you kick, I move!!

](*,) :banana-dance:
“How can a bird that is born for joy
Sit in a cage and sing?”
― William Blake


“Little Fly
Thy summers play,
My thoughtless hand
Has brush'd away.

Am not I
A fly like thee?
Or art not thou
A man like me?

For I dance
And drink & sing:
Till some blind hand
Shall brush my wing.

If thought is life
And strength & breath:
And the want
Of thought is death;

Then am I
A happy fly,
If I live,
Or if I die”
― William Blake, Songs of Innocence and of Experience


“No bird soars too high if he soars with his own wings.”
― William Blake
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby felix dakat » Thu Apr 22, 2010 6:03 pm

Ach - you kick, I move!!
cause and effect I suppose
such tag feels painful

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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Thu Apr 22, 2010 6:18 pm

felix dakat wrote:Ach - you kick, I move!!
cause and effect I suppose
such tag feels painful


such tag feels painful
Come - says Mother Earth - and lay
Upon my bosom!
:lol:
“How can a bird that is born for joy
Sit in a cage and sing?”
― William Blake


“Little Fly
Thy summers play,
My thoughtless hand
Has brush'd away.

Am not I
A fly like thee?
Or art not thou
A man like me?

For I dance
And drink & sing:
Till some blind hand
Shall brush my wing.

If thought is life
And strength & breath:
And the want
Of thought is death;

Then am I
A happy fly,
If I live,
Or if I die”
― William Blake, Songs of Innocence and of Experience


“No bird soars too high if he soars with his own wings.”
― William Blake
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Che » Thu Apr 22, 2010 7:55 pm

Upon my bosom
inked words embedded display:
This is my body.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Thu Apr 22, 2010 8:21 pm

Che wrote:Upon my bosom
inked words embedded display:
This is my body.


This is my body.
It lies upon this altar
Druid sacrifice!!!
“How can a bird that is born for joy
Sit in a cage and sing?”
― William Blake


“Little Fly
Thy summers play,
My thoughtless hand
Has brush'd away.

Am not I
A fly like thee?
Or art not thou
A man like me?

For I dance
And drink & sing:
Till some blind hand
Shall brush my wing.

If thought is life
And strength & breath:
And the want
Of thought is death;

Then am I
A happy fly,
If I live,
Or if I die”
― William Blake, Songs of Innocence and of Experience


“No bird soars too high if he soars with his own wings.”
― William Blake
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Wonderer » Thu Apr 22, 2010 11:14 pm

Druid sacrifice,
A stinging blade dripping blood;
Homage to the "Gods"...
Whatever makes you happy.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Thu Apr 22, 2010 11:23 pm

Wonderer wrote:Druid sacrifice,
A stinging blade dripping blood;
Homage to the "Gods"...


Homage to the "Gods"
Ha - better bow before Self
Worship be your Name
“How can a bird that is born for joy
Sit in a cage and sing?”
― William Blake


“Little Fly
Thy summers play,
My thoughtless hand
Has brush'd away.

Am not I
A fly like thee?
Or art not thou
A man like me?

For I dance
And drink & sing:
Till some blind hand
Shall brush my wing.

If thought is life
And strength & breath:
And the want
Of thought is death;

Then am I
A happy fly,
If I live,
Or if I die”
― William Blake, Songs of Innocence and of Experience


“No bird soars too high if he soars with his own wings.”
― William Blake
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Wonderer » Thu Apr 22, 2010 11:53 pm

Worship be your name
Entered brightly, tears of joy,
Enslaver of man.
Whatever makes you happy.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Thu Apr 22, 2010 11:59 pm

Wonderer wrote:Worship be your name
Entered brightly, tears of joy,
Enslaver of man.


Enslaver of man?
Look within yourselves - say I
Seek and ye shall find!
:lol:
“How can a bird that is born for joy
Sit in a cage and sing?”
― William Blake


“Little Fly
Thy summers play,
My thoughtless hand
Has brush'd away.

Am not I
A fly like thee?
Or art not thou
A man like me?

For I dance
And drink & sing:
Till some blind hand
Shall brush my wing.

If thought is life
And strength & breath:
And the want
Of thought is death;

Then am I
A happy fly,
If I live,
Or if I die”
― William Blake, Songs of Innocence and of Experience


“No bird soars too high if he soars with his own wings.”
― William Blake
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby PavlovianModel146 » Fri Apr 23, 2010 4:04 am

Seek and ye shall find,
Unless you forget to look,
Or are too lazy.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Che » Fri Apr 23, 2010 4:41 am

Or are too lazy
the future leaders of our
world, wasting at screens?
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Fri Apr 23, 2010 2:26 pm

Che wrote:Or are too lazy
the future leaders of our
world, wasting at screens?


world, wasting at screens
run, jump, play, frolic outside
Eat, ruminate - books!!
“How can a bird that is born for joy
Sit in a cage and sing?”
― William Blake


“Little Fly
Thy summers play,
My thoughtless hand
Has brush'd away.

Am not I
A fly like thee?
Or art not thou
A man like me?

For I dance
And drink & sing:
Till some blind hand
Shall brush my wing.

If thought is life
And strength & breath:
And the want
Of thought is death;

Then am I
A happy fly,
If I live,
Or if I die”
― William Blake, Songs of Innocence and of Experience


“No bird soars too high if he soars with his own wings.”
― William Blake
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Che » Fri Apr 23, 2010 9:56 pm

Eat, ruminate books,
thoughts entwined with solitude,
lose mind, die tragic.
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