Well the reason paragraphs were so much longer- the reason why Proust for example wrote page long sentences, has nothing to do with them wanting to, what? Make it easier without having a computer to use? Is that what you think they wrote in that manner for?
I do not find it less readable to have monolithic text like that. I use paragraphs, not to make things easier to read, but to separate one idea from another.
A paragraph might run for five pages. The annotations to it might run for five pages.
That is how I use them, and what I have in mind when I edit.
Like I said, I found a few publishing houses that didn’t have an issue with it and still, contrary to your point with the no computer bit, text is still formatted that way in academia.
Thus your assumption that this style of monolithic text is outdated isn’t true, first of all; secondly, your explanation as to why text was once written like that is silly.
I remember in high school they told us: Paragraphs! 4-5 sentences! We’re not in high school anymore, well at least I am not.
It’s great that you’re into coding. I am sure you know quite a bit about it. I know quite a bit about a few things too: I wrote 10 five-hundred page volumes of philosophy while exiled into my cloister, during which I didn’t leave a single room for nearly 15 years and did nothing but that, save for reading (2-3 books a day) and learning other, foreign languages.
I was happy to find publishers that were still interested despite by distended and sometimes antique style, and it gave me hope about the state of the modern reader too: but even if I hadn’t, I wouldn’t have cared.
I do not go out of my way to make things more difficult than they are, but I also don’t go out of my way to make them easier. And at bottom: I am not trying to best any modern writer- only a few have even drawn my respect.
I have greater challenges with which I have honed my razors. For I have not designed to be a fad. Perhaps my readership will be smaller than it could be due to my resistance to prune myself to the pitch of the modern ear: but modern authors blossom quickly and are blown away like fallen leaves even more so.
Writing has become a fad. I am here to stay, and I would prefer a smaller and more dedicated readership that will spread my name after my death, and in this way continue to grow, then a larger one now that fades away and leaves my name in the dust.
You do you.
[You see how I break the paragraph here. That’s because I have moved on to the next idea from the subject of writing, in this post. Perhaps you would find it easier if you put down your phone and tried reading this on a monitor.]
“This particular guy is very much into the Constitution.” Oooh Phoneutria, he’s into the constitution! So scary isn’t it! Phoneutria,
“I believe that I also have not been discourteous with you, and if you feel that I have I sincerely apologize.”
I don’t bother with the quote feature because I rarely find more than a sentence or two in someone’s post worth quoting or responding to.
And nah, that bit was directed to the other guy, Unwrong. (my using the phrase (and to phoneutria) a second after that sentence should have, you know. Implied that. See this is what I am talking about spoon-feeding. I’ll keep in mind your “difficulties” next time.